Wow..That was very chilling and poinant. Defiantly not the kind of thing you usually write, but still absolutely excellent.

Hi!

This fic was a real pleasure to read. Such well turned prose.

My only criticism is that it might be a touch too verbose for a fic in Seras's first person POV. The language sometimes gets a bit too fancy for her, IMO.

Still, I enjoyed reading this. I hope you post more fics/oneshots soon.

Huzzah for not fluffy hinted AxS that could be taken as father/daughter, teacher/student and lovers! If only more could grasp the complex relationships.

I don't put it angst, Seras isn't wailing or lamenting anything (cry me a river, teenagers). I added both your fics to the C2 Remarkable Hellsing fiction. Congrats. If you want to trade a ficlet with me, no problem but it will have to wait after I finish my requests. Someday ;)