Reviews for Alexandra The Arrogant

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Data Seeker 2008-06-12 ch 12,	abuseDear MaryRose Thanks for the update. Very short. You can get away with it due to the cliffhanger deal in this chapter. But you should make your chapters longer then this though. Anyway, enough with the criticism. The narration and dialog is creative and in character (though its been years since I saw Jossie and the Pussycats). The wholesome standards are totally high. Nothing offensive. I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker
Erin T. Aardvark 2007-12-03 ch 11,	abuseI really like this story. I can see it as an episode of the TV show. I can hear the character voices speaking the dialog as I read it. I hope you finish it. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what's going to happen!
Data Seeker 2007-10-13 ch 10,	abuseMaryRose Nice chapter. The quality is good. Everyone (except Alexandra) are back at the ship and are getting ready to leave. Poor Melody, they won't listen to her. Now their leaving; not realizing the danger Alexandra is in. The wholesome standards are high (as usual). I hope this review has a good influence on you. I will be waiting for an update. God bless. Data Seeker P.S. I hope to get a reply from you.
Data Seeker 2007-10-13 ch 9,	abuseDear MaryRose Another short, but good chapter; featuring Valerie and Alex at the ship. The interaction between them was pretty good. The wholesome standards are high. I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker
Data Seeker 2007-10-13 ch 8,	abuseDear MaryRose A short, but good chapter. Well written. Melody and Bleep are reunited with Josie and company and has news for them, but they won't listen. Nice cliffhanger. Wonder how she'll tell them if they won't listen. The wholesome standards are high. Nothing offensive. I hope your not getting bored with me flattering you with the same old things. I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker
Data Seeker 2007-10-13 ch 7,	abuseDear MaryRose Another good chapter; featuring the missing Bleep and Melody. Melody lost like a little child (she is like a child due to her simple mindset) and realizing her mistake. Very emotional. Then she overhears some aliens talking about sacrfacing their new ruler to their god (I suspected it was too good to be true). Now she has to find the others. The wholesome standards are high; nothing offensive. I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker
Data Seeker 2007-10-13 ch 6,	abuseDear MaryRose Another good chapter. The quality is good. Interesting; the aliens have made Alexandra their ruler. Josie and the others are surprised; Alexandra is egotistic (very in character); but the bright side is that she is not making things too difficult for Josie and the others. Now they have to find Melody. Though I wonder what's up. Is Alexandra is some kind of danger; like maybe the aliens have a ritual to sacrface their rulers, and Josie and the others will have to rescue her? I guess I'll find out in time. The wholesome standards are high. Nothing offensive. I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker
Data Seeker 2007-10-13 ch 5,	abuseDear MaryRose Kind of short, but nice chapter. They are sneaking back to rescue Alexandra; suddenly Melody is missing (That's suspensful). They continue on their way to find Alexandra (and Melody) and they come to a place are meet a surprise. Nice cliffhanger. the wholesome standards are high; and the slang that was used is not offensive. Thank you. I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker
Data Seeker 2007-10-13 ch 4,	abuseDear Author Good chapter. It was well written. They have reached their ship, but they need to go back and rescue Alexandera. Very interesting and their dialogues were in character. The wholesome standards are good too. I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker
Data Seeker 2007-10-13 ch 3,	abuseDear MaryRose Another good chapter. Well written and has some depth woven into it. Everyone is discouraged; and Melodie (who is so in character with her childlike personality) talks with Bleep, sad and wishing they can escape and Bleep has a plan to help them escape. Everyone (except for Melodie with her childlike faith) doesn't believe he can help. And he flies out and finds the keys to their cell. Very cute, slightly humorous and emotional. The wholesome standards are high. Nothing offensive. I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker
Data Seeker 2007-10-13 ch 2,	abuseDear MaryRose Another good chapter. The quality is pretty good. The characters interactions and dialogue was amusing and in character. Interesting turn of events. They get captured by aliens, locked up and Alexandra gets unreasonable and yells to be released and the alien guard takes her away. the wholesome standards are high, like in the pervious chapters. GOOD JOB. I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker
Data Seeker 2007-10-13 ch 1,	abuseDear MaryRose I haven't seen Josie and the Pussycats since I was a little kids (that was many years ago). I haven't completly out-grown my liking of the old Hanna/Barbara cartoon series. I am interested in your story and am going to read it and leave a review for each chapter. Chapter 1 is pretty good. The narration and dialogues are good. The characters are done pretty well. The beginning is good; a mishap occures in their space ship and have to land on an alien planet. Now they have to search the place. The wholesome standards are high. The language is clean. Nothing suggestively offensive. No extreme violence or any other vile content. I hope future chapters are clean too. I also hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker
dth1971 2007-08-10 ch 10,	abuseThis was part of the Josie and the Pussycats in Outer Space saga where they never got back to earth?
Liber Logaeth 2006-06-04 ch 9,	abuseI'm waiting for more plots! Go on, please!
Liber Logaeth 2006-05-15 ch 8,	abuseOh, so you went forward with the story... But this chapter is so short... What a pitty!

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