Erm interesting perspective on Mirai Trunks time line.

I like how you're taking your time to develop the three central characters of this story -- and I'm really glad you decided to pick it up again. I'm really looking forward to reading more, and I hope you'll take it up all the way to Trunk's time-travelling.

That was really good. I love the insight we get for the home life and how Trunks is influenced by Gohan. I love reading the Mirai timeline. You have the characters so balanced, as always.

This is actually becomming more interesting as the chapters go by. I'm actually anxious to see what happens next. Don't leave us hanging for too long, okay.

ANNA

OMG you actually had me spill a tear when I was reading the bit where going told about Vegeta´s dead. Well god job I must say!

Yay! I was hoping that you would update this one soon. :D Lovely chapter, I can sympathize with Bulma very much--you really wrote that scene between her and Trunks wonderfully. It was so real, it sounded exactly like what any parent in that situation would say. And the way you described Trunks crying because she was crying really hit home too for some reason, small detail though it was. I feel like I've been in that situation many times myself and I could relate to it very well. Good stuff, as usual! I look forward to more. :3

this is okay, but would be better if you actually had gohan/trunks kill the androids.

Aw--I loved it. This glimpse into their daily lives is perfect for setting up the atmosphere of the story. You're doing a great job and no worries about the wait--we all have real lives. :) I really like the way you've got the relationships set up here, it all works well together and is very believable. I look forward to the next installment.

update soon!
-lugga

hey, i just noticed that this fic has more chapters. :S

how stupid of me. lol.

love it!

o i like it. update soon!

love ya!
-lugga

Yay! I'm glad that you decided to continue with this. :D This is Kasei by the way, I was too lazy to log in earlier. ^^;

I love your writing style, and I like the way that you're portraying Trunks and the way that he views the world. You've set up the characters and their points of view very nicely and I really like what I'm reading so far. I think this can go many places, and I look forward to the next installment. n_n

spell mishaps (or mistakes...woteva)

Dimi...ok, seriously, does microsoft really allow this? Either i'm old fashioned or u mis-spelt it. Anyway, it should be demi. d-E-m-i.

wandered should be wondered. As in, pondering, right?

Tho saying that, my spellin sucks. Like a bucket of ticks.

Good story, brought tears to my eyes, blah blah, yada yada...

GOoDNIGHT!

You should make the Z warriors come back in the end! Trunks should go to Namek and wish everyone back. And maybe, in order to wish Goku back, he could transfer ALL of Earth Shenron's power to Porunga, the Namekian dragon. Of course he'll have to wish everyone back killed by the Androids and Cell back to life first.(Since Piccolo would be alive, the Earth Dragonballs would be back too.) YIPEE!! THEN TRUNKS KUN COULD SEE AND LIVE W/ EVERYONE IN HIS OWN TIME!! KEY WORD THERE: OWN TIME! UPDATE SOON!
Hope you found my idea useful. :)

god this was so sad... *snif* i atually miss vegeta here.

Hey a new chapter YAY! I loved it