   nightwing27
2009-12-08 . chapter 3good chapter |
nightwing27
2009-12-08 . chapter 2good chapter |
nightwing27
2009-12-08 . chapter 1wow hot start |
Dragorion
2006-07-18 . chapter 8I just finished all 8 chapters and i'd like to
say that 8 wasn't as bad as the rest. Some made
laugh so hard i cryed, some scared me. Some I
just didn't want to read. Get back to sick bastard
Keitaro. |
ANONYMOUS
2006-05-04 . chapter 8 Strangely arousing... O.o |
The guy
2006-05-01 . chapter 8 3 little words
WHAT THE FUCK!?!!??!?!!?!? |
dollah
2006-04-24 . chapter 1Yeah! This is some funny shit. What! I think this story is OKAY! |
Internet Luv Masheen
2005-08-21 . chapter 8OMFG! WTF was that pile of ass-chocolate? I'll tell you what! EXCELLENT! NEED CHAPTER 9 NOW! |
The Eldest Hero
2005-07-18 . chapter 3Come on. Im waiting patiently for an update dude |
The Eldest Hero
2005-07-18 . chapter 8Wow. You are the most depraved writer i have ever freakin met |
Juu-Bei
2005-07-06 . chapter 1wow random 5 way sex |
Innortal
2005-07-01 . chapter 8One question, where was Tsuruko hiding?
Great work. Keep it up.
Innortal |
BigFics
2005-07-01 . chapter 8(3 words) What...The...FUCK! |
 kei-kun496
2005-07-01 . chapter 8umm... i don't even...
yeah...
no comment...
-_- |
tomdj1701
2005-07-01 . chapter 8Not half bad. Keep up the good work.
Though I did notice one error.
When you wrote "screaming for help but then he remembered that he and Motoko were here" I think you meant "... that only he and Motoko were here".
Anyway still a very funny chapter. |
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