Can i just say that i hope that never ever happens to them.The story was good, great, but it really creeped me out.

BB/Rae for all Eternity!

wow... awesome... gulp

Pax nC

Holy... crap. This was SCARY. Though some of the beats were off minutely, the majority of it worked, and I must say good job. I would be proud of this too, if I had written it. Nice job.

hey. so... you like peoms that have arguments in them? no? yes? whatever. i liked your poem, it was very spiritual. but hey, who cares about how i feel? see you around kid.

You should be proud of this poem. I liked it and that's saying something. In general, I have a real prejudice against poetry fics. (And humor pieces. I like humor, but so many times people just put stupid stuff in there thinking it will be funny). But I enjoyed this poem, even though I hate the thought of Raven being alone and the other Titans gone. (I'm also glad because you seem to understand the concept that Terra is not a good person.) Just constructive criticism for the future: Try not to overuse your rhyming words. You use "whore" to rhyme something too much. Also, I know it's REALLY hard to do a rhyming poem, but if you decide to do one, be REALLY careful about your rhymes (death and regret don't really rhyme). Yeah. But other than those two minor things, this poem had a very good sound to it, like it would be good to read aloud. Good job.

That is amazing! Wow! That is so incredibly good! I wish my poems were that cool. I really liked it!

-Samieko

A good poem. Normally I don't read them, but you kept the rhyme and meter fairly constant, and that was refreshing. Good work.

oh my god! that was creepy (yes!) cool (yesx2) and AWESOME! yay for angst!