y'all!When's the next chpater?

more more more more!

yay for D/N i luved this it was great!please go on! pweeze?

update update! this is too good to let go!

yey! you need to write a long fic about their Sage and Amanda before they came to tortall, it would be excellent!

"Kel one of course and they trotted..." It should be won, not one.

Hey - Your story is really cool so far - maybe you could add some more about Kel and Neal together and maybe Daine having kids?

very good plz write more soon

DUDE! i love this story

i'm guessing you love monty python

it's just a flesh wound

(i'm a little insane to)

This is really good! I want more... please? (puppy face). Cool diddykins!

For Tortall and the Champion!

-KelDomForever

Oh no. Please keep writing. I need more AH!

your grey magic idea is really clever, i'd like to see where this story ends up! also could u please put more daine and numair fluff in, i love it!

i love the story!

so now.. thery're picking each other up and dumping them on ponies...

_ more?

_ more?

'old tongue'? do you read wheel of time?

_ more?