This was really well done. Total hunky monkey he might be but Sheppard is still a soldier and would have had to do things civilians would be horrified by. Can't wait to hear his POV

AMAZING story, you should keep writing! (about this i mean)

I liked these. I suppose it would be a bit of a shock to Elizabeth seeing John being Major Sheppard, soldier. After all, she's very rarely in amongst the fight situations, so she only ever really sees John.

I've noticed this Major on several occasions, and he can do one scary stare when he wants to. I'm often intrigued by what's in his past. After all, his tactics against the Genii don't strike me as the sort of ground tactics that a pilot would need to learn. Where did he learn them? I think of O'Neill. He would have used similar tactics, and he learned them in black ops...makes me wonder. This fic goes a little way to exploring his motivations. Nice :).

I like this fic.

very good john angst

Very nice.

very good chapter. loved how it was train of thought for John. I could see his face while he was talking. good descriptions. :D

Hm...very interesting...I can just imagine Weir forgetting that John is a trained soldier-after all, she doesn't see him while he is on missions. I'm anxiously waiting to read John's POV.

I like this muchly. Tis kinda scary how John can switch from one way to the other. Yet he is BOTH those men. He's much more than a simple fly boy, methinks. Well done. Can't wait to read John's POV. I love all of SGA but Sheppard is my favorite because he's the most complex character on the show. Okay..and he's HOT too! LOL

very nice, though I haven't seen The Eye yet. :)