Very powerful.

Well this is very interesting. It has made me ponder on what would have happened to them if Kagome didn't come through the well; and I believe you have done an excellent job at showing this.

I just re-read this, and I must say, it's much better the ninth time.

This is really beautiful, and even though it's been forever since it was written and posted, it's still beautiful.

whoa...

This is another one I always loved...By the way, the summary is very scary for some reason. I love the last scene where you see what happened.

I like the way this Miroku fic came full-circle...

Earrggh! The ending is so wrenching. Miroku and Inuyasha's competing visions of happiness, and the consequences of buying it with the jewel...what a fantastic concept. Great stuff. Thank you for sharing your nightmare-fic.

that really was something. loved it.

With this fic, you've made me a fangirl. It's haunting, sounds almost unworldly, and the final lines echo in your head long after you're done reading it. That was amazing. Inu-Yasha used the jewel, but everything stayed the same. Just... how do you do it? ((worships))

Miroku seemed almost not himself, as though he was a ghost of the character we always see. His characterization, like the fic in it's entirety, was beautiful; breath-taking. I'm literally rasping now.

I also liked reading the glimpses of what became of the other characters, most notably Shippô's "fate." Clever how you worked that one in.

Yes, there were loads of grammatical errors, and yes, the fic was a bit overly-sloshy. But I think that fangirling takes precedence over grammer. (Note the spelling.) This was so moving, and yet so very frightening. It made my night. I can't wait to see what wonders you have in store for the IY fandom next. (A SessKag, I've heard?)

Ja ne!

amazing absolutely amazing

This possibility always lurked in my mind when I wondered, "What if?" Very nicely done. You captured emotion and inspired mine.

Nightmare indeed. A very powerful story and a well thought out glimpse of what might have been.

Wow. It was pretty deep, and angsty, not to mention extremely sad, but I still loved it! some of the parts confused me a bit, so I'll probably have to go back and re-read them, but it is entirely worth it! Thank you.

-Gapes-

Wow... Just... Wow... The whole fic is so hauntingly true, so beautifully sad and realistic and every sentence means something and each word seems to be chosen for the fic.

You're very talented. Off to read more of your fics. -Runs off-

Awesome. This is very deep and filled with amazing imagery. Good job! HUGS