I liked this one!

This was a very good story. It also is very realistic. It's one of my favorite one-shots. Keep writing! :-)

It's nice reading a fic that goes a little into Dex's mind, as she is a complex character that never shows what she truly feels. Besides, you've expressed her thoughts and feelings wonderfully.

I like it. Subtle? No. Still interesting? Yes. Reads more like a history than a story, but it works.

wow

Quite a well-written view on the Dex/Bobby relationship that lasted a few episodes. That's all I can say here. We need more "Jack & Bobby" fics,and you seem to have some good ideas.

Not sure that i would agree with the view of the relationship but definantly a well written fiction.

Oh I luv this Jack & Bobby stuff. I like your writing. If you have anymore ideas it would be awesome for you to write about them. J & B won't be one for a while and I need all I can get.

Hey! keep writing its real good so far I think Dex & Bobby make a good couple! I LOVE JACK & BOBBY!

Hey! keep writing its real good so far I think Dex & Bobby make a good couple! I LOVE JACK & BOBBY!