oh my gosh ... this was really good. i couldn't help it, all i could picture was two guys ... lol. loved it!

That was sexy. A little odd, but sexy nonetheless.

SEXY SEXY SEXY like you. You're sexy.

But really dude this stroy is just...so sexy. There's no other word for it. I really can't think of anotehr word for it but sexy. GOOD sexy.

Much love,

Liams Kitten

;_; /sniffle

Dude... on one hand, this fact makes me want to stand up and shout "ASTHMATICS OF THE WORLD - UNITE - cough hack wheze!", and on the other, much more rational, side I really want to cry.

Luck, luck, luck for the contest you're entering!

Wow... that was good.

Lyra

whoa...

WOW. just plain WOW. SO good.

Have I told you that I love you and your writing? Cuz i do.

I'm not really sure who I imagined this as... i think a cross btw Javid and Sputchy.. i dunno i jus did! hehe

I

*Applauds* Beautiful. Well done, Saturday-chan! At first, I was all, SPRACE! But then it was all, "his dark eyes" or something. And then I'm all, "BUT SPOT HAS BLUE/GREEN/HAZEL EYES! THE EYES THAT HAVE FANGIRLS AT EACH OTHERS' THROATS TO INDENTIFY THE SHADE!" So, I just read it as if it were my two friends, Franckie and Zach. Because they BOTH have dark eyes. And they can't deny that they love each other, and give the "I like WOMEN!" excuse. Nyah-ah! I mean, my three friends and myself make up the OMG FRANCKIE & ZACH OTP!11 Club.

*Pause*

*Coughs* Um, er, yeah... *Claps again* Well done Saturday! _

Lots of love! Sapphy

absomotherfcukinlutely perfect.

I'M MAKING IT JACK/DAVID.

And it's...sexy and beautiful and cruel and lovely and crazy and sad and wonderful and PERFECT.

And I love you.

How can you write something so sinister and almost pornographic without even hinting at anything obscene? I envy you.

It's wonderful.

Love,

Dakkikins

This was really good!