Oh my god, please tell me it's not over? please? I would be so sad if Obi-Wan died... maybe i don't really want to know the end... wait a second, what am i saying, of course i do!

I almost had heart failure when I saw the alert! HOORAY! Update! I never reviewed this story before, but I do love it and I like the idea of the Adi/Obi-Wan pairing. This chapter was very emotive, and very well-written. Thank you for updating!

Well if you update. Please do. I love your story.

Eh, I hate cliffies...I *heart* it. Update soon!

This is a really good story, I like it a lot. I read all 7 chapters in one go, so sorry for not reviewing the others. Yes you love cliffhangers don't you! Don't worry about long conversations so much, they add detail to a story, providing they're done well, and you do them well. I haven't read any of the SW books so I don't really know who these extra characters are or what they look like, but I guess I don't really need to.
One question: what happened to Anakin during that last scene? How come he wasn't all over his master with worry?

Yes, I always thought that Siri and Obi should be together, but anyway, GREAT CHAPTER!! poor obi! Has to function with one stinkin arm. poor poor guy...

oh good chapter. im excited for the twists to come. great work

8-O! obi-wans arm got eaten off!ah!yup yup yup i have read the book secrets of the jedi and it is about obi and siri gett'n together.:D i highly suggest if u like ja to read it!:) great chapter! it took a long time to update i hope it doesn't take that long for the next update!why why why do u give me CLIFFES!!??! I AM BEING TOURTURED!WAH!:) update soon!

-jkk

Heh... I liked this chapter... a LOT... favorite one, I think. (grins insanely) No! Don't stay away! It only gets into graphic junk when we hit Sullust, which is only as bad as Weathertop... less worse, really... then later, on Yavin IV, I think... Myrkr's not bad... it's when we get into the third story that it's REALLY evil.

Stop glaring at me in other people's reviews! I'm just being honest. I had trouble reading a few of your chapters. This one was good...

Yeah. Thanks for the update... be nice to Obi-Wan! (sulks)

MTFBWY! We'll see how RotS AND LotG go... snrk. Mirrors...

-Eowyn Skywalker

er... are you gonna give us another its been over 20 days...

A good story and very well done. Nice job!

T'was perfectly PG rated, my Padawan. You want PG 13 graphics... I'll show you PG 13. (hiss) I mean, you need to see... READ some of the stuff Jandalf and I have done. (shudders) I swear, that fic should be PG 13 in it's time...

Merely for scary angsty junk.

Good update. You're starting to improve on your style, though the chapter was still a bit hard to read.

And... that quote... completely knowing where it's going. (shivers) You are your mother, in a sense. RP mom, I mean. She said nearly the same thing, once... And you're right, I don't, but I have an idea. Heh heh heh.

MTplotBWY.
-The Skywalker that is Me.

This is an AWESOME chapter! I really like it! Love the cliff hanger too hahaha

NO! i HATE! cliffe hangers! ah you are a brilliant writer and i like this story but u r very cruel! :D:D:D very good story cant wait to see more, update soon please! does obi live?! ah! when are he and adi gonna get together?! ah!... por obi- wan :D:D:D:D:D

OMG that was an evil evil cliffie! great chapter tho i cant wait for the next chapter. awsome work as always.