Hi I like your story! That's instersting,haveing a girl yami!
;)

Boy...this was scary! Good job on the horror stuff. Marik did kinda' deserve it, but I actually feel a little bad for him! XD Good job!

wow that sounds a story by Egar allan poe ...what was it called Case of Armillo or something anyway that basted what desered but I wish Viper mension poor Mai she went beacause him.

This story is good. I hate how you tortured Yami Marik (my favorite character), but...sorry Yami Marik...he deserved it. I noticed how there where little spelling errors this time(only one), good job!

great story!!

wow...uh ok...COOL...

about time he got what he diserves. This is a very good story very well writen.

Wow...that was some powerful stuff!! I am impressed. I love your writing style and everything you write!! Everything it is just amazing!! This story...I mean wow that had some serious stuff!! Very well thought out and written!! I absolutely thought it was amazing!! Fantastic job!!