Aw. so sad.

That was very beautiful, a little confusing, and mostly raw emotion. Fantastic job.

-cries out at the sheer angst-

you cruel person...how could you leave me with an open ending! ah well, fic was good. -smile-

Wow, that was beautiful.

aw, so sad and cute.

sad and strange

I... I loved this one-shot, but...right now I'm kinda sad because of the ending u_u

Wow! Still, Naruto can't die; not like that?! I’m in denial now! Though, I suppose, if you have to die, why not in the arms of the one you love?

Anyways…This fic made me remember that I love dialog-based stories, especially when they're about lovers arguing over some angsty decision one of them has to make. This story continued to build in tension right up to the very end. Nice job!

Also I liked how Naruto kept referring to how fake Sasuke looked in all of his makeup (You know you could actually derive a lot of symbolic meaning from that: as if Sasuke was the one that was already dead or dying despite the fact that Naruto was making the request). And then for Naruto to smear Sasuke’s lipstick like that, I swear you could totally feel the emotion radiating off of that motion, as if he was trying to bring Sasuke back to life, or the way he use to be.

Normally I am not a huge fan of men in makeup. However, I actually liked make-up wearing Sasuke in this story. Normally the more feminine a man goes the more turned off I get. And makeup is right up there among the feminine. But in this story, Sasuke still maintained his masculinity under all of that makeup. Like when you mentioned the stubble. (Familiar to me, I felt like I was touching my hubby). The first paragraph when Sasuke came out of hiding at Naruto’s request, made Sasuke seem more like a giving, masculine partner (I thought of the line ‘As you wish,’ from Princess Bride). And even Sasuke’s conclusion to help Naruto carry out his decision reflected this: he was willing to be strong for his partner, even under those circumstances.

I have to say I am quite impressed by your writing skills. Your descriptions and details not only helped to immerse the reader more and more into your story plus they were not used simply as fillers. There was only one part that I got a bit confused. At the lines: ‘There was one long step between them, when Naruto took a spot on the other side, back to the wall. Miles and miles.’ The ‘miles and miles’ part was a bit confusing. I sort of got your meaning here, but the fragment really doesn’t flow. Maybe try fitting it in the sentence somehow? Other than that I couldn’t find any other errors.

Good job!

wow...that's all I can say...wow...
A really good one-shot there XD
So..Sasuke...he's..gonna kill Naruto?...T_T..No!!...and poor Naruto...STUPID KYUUBI!!...>:(...

Well...anyways..this was a goodstory;)..keep it up:D

Love SasuNaru, but with all the lipstick .. it was alittle werid. But still very enjoyable.

I want to cry now =(( It was so flipping cute, but I don't want Naruto to die! Dx

Simply amazing, I love this.
The detal of this story is vast and magnificent.

How Naruto observes Sasuke. He is very much in character.
And I love what Naruto says about Sasukes make-up, and how you put so much detail in what he does and how Naruto does it.
That, right there is what makes a brilliant author.

You are truly wonderful, the plot is devine.
If there was a situation like that in the series then that is what would play out.
I truly think Naruto would chose Sasuke to do it.
But the SasuNaru moment probally wouldn't happen though.
Anyways I love this and I am very happy that you wrote it.
Thank-you.

Beautiful, breathe catching
Loved it

Oh ... wow ...

(i've read this before, but I don't think I reviewed ...)

That was so sad. Depressing. Emotional. Also, a tad bit creepy ... and ... i feel shallow for even saying this ... it was hot.

*cough awesomeness!

i ususally don't read fics like this but... this one touched me. it's so tragically beautiful. adding to my favs. definately.