  aradow 7/9/03 . chapter 12 I liked this story. It was very cute. Just one thing, you might want to have a couple people read over you writing. The only errors were gramatical and spelling mistakes. Those are easily caught by proof reading. Nice job and keep it up! |
 TigerWolf 11/10/01 . chapter 12this was a very sweet story, I enjoyed reading it greatly. I really like the ending it put a twist on why one would stay or go back and I was happy it all came out for the good. -TigerWolf |
| Cur2003 6/30/01 . chapter 2 I love this story:) |
| Oki 5/12/01 . chapter 12 WOW! I love this story soooooooo much! It's so amazing! It's wonderful! Make a sequal please! I really love this story!Oki |
| JoJo 5/12/01 . chapter 12 This was such a good story. I really loved it. You should write more storys. _ |
| Rudee 5/12/01 . chapter 12 oh my god, that was the best story with an ending i have read in a long time, i read it while listening to my FF7 soundtrack, can you belive that i got tears in my eyes!, Aeris's song suits this story perfectly, i love this story, i'm writting my own Fanfic involving Van and Hitomi's sons and a girl in between them as soon as i can i'll post it but i want to get quiet a few chapters done,
Congradulations, and praise for this awesome story
*Mouse |
| Mizzkitty9886 5/12/01 . chapter 12 lovely story |
| oki 4/22/01 . chapter 4 HURRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYY! |
| LILYGIRL2001 4/21/01 . chapter 4 GREAT STORY! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER TO COME OUT! |
| No One 4/21/01 . chapter 4 I really liked your story. All of the parts. I can't wait to read the next part of the story. When is it coming out? Can't wait. Keep up the good work. |
| Lea 4/21/01 . chapter 4 Did you once have only the first chapter up as a short fic? Because I thougt I had read it before. This is cool, but may I ask you to stick an aristrix(*), or however you spell that, when you go off into a different part of the story? I was confused at first when the soldier came a put down the tarot cards and talked about 'the girl from the Mystic Moon.' I thought the soldier was talking to Van and had no idea that Hitomi is there. And one more thing, it really IRKS me to see Allen spelled 'Allan.' :-) Anyways... lol I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Lea |
| angelic1090 4/14/01 . chapter 3 Eep. Cliffhanger. Please continue! |
| AyanamiChan 4/14/01 . chapter 3 This is really good! Keep it coming! *hugs* |
| LILYGIRL2001 4/13/01 . chapter 3 JUST LIKE THEIR 1ST MEETING, SHE SAVED HIM! |
| Invisible Rain 4/13/01 . chapter 3 i'm crying can you blieve that i have tears rolling down my cheeks, seriously. Please continue before i start choking on my own tears |
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