loved it thanks for writing it~!

absolutley adorable! Rae seems a little too content, but other than that it's wonderful! LOVE the bit about the writing on the glass! XD i can't believe so much of this came from your head! It's amazingly realistic!

dude! Is Rorek Trigon's son?! that would mean Rorek and Raven are related, which means Mal and Raven are related! Incest! Demonic incest!

y'know, it'll prob be easier for me to just go read the naext chapter

fantastic story so far, I HAVE to read the rest of it! the plot twists and love going every which way is amazing!

I absolutely LOVED IT! I was laughing so hard at parts of it!!

That is the cutest thing in the world!

That was awesome! I loved it.

I Loved it! is there going to be a sequal(or how ya spell it, u know what I'm talking about.)so is there I can't wait if there is.

it was awesome!very well written

Dude, i've read some stories in my life but i have to say, yours is the best yet!Keep up your awesome work!Serious respect bro! ;)

teen titans!
its been awhile since i've read one and ofcourse the first one for me to had to be a malrae fic seeing that the last one i read was spellbound(antother malrae) or somthin like that anyways so far im lovin your fic and i can't wait to continue it^^

That was so sweet!

This is such an amazing piece of writing! My personal all-time favorite, and I'm not one for the whole "Raven-BB" pair! Of course, the fact that Spellbound is one of my favorite episodes may have helped, but this story can stand on its own and still have the same effect.

Absolutely beautiful!

Guess you didn't know Azar was a girl...?

And do you know that there were 3 Azars? Sorry, I'm such a Raven nerd...

Love it! Love, LOVE LOVE this story! Definately the best I've ever read. And there's still the epilogue!

Through all the trauma, there's still all the parts that make me laugh! I love how you kept Raven's personality alive even with the feelings she was feeling for BB in this chapter... Not to mention all of the creativity you showed with the afterlife and the "journey."

Oh, god, this is HYSTERICAL! "Random pieces of toast sticking out of the cabinet" huh? "The fact that you can say that with that look on your face is just way too creepy" indeed. "Terra was too disturbed to say anything." No comment neccesary! "and were attacked by two flying sponges." Love the word choice!

Related to Dumbledore-?! (desperately suppressing laughter)

I'm not much for the Raven-BB any-more-than-special-empathetic-friends, but this story is too amazing to let that bother me.

Raven on piano... Makes me think of Amy Lee. (Do you know who...? The singer, songwriter, piano plaer, and arranger for Evanescence - sad soft haunting music, definately.

Hm. Creativity. I like that. That song sounds so special... Azarathians are pretty unique. That's a really soft-sounding song!

That scene with the piano is so special! Okay, you are an AMAZING author! You're making me feel almost like supporting this pairing, and I'm feelign affectionate -ok, love- and believe me, I'm a hard nut to crack.

I actually hated the sudden change of scene!

Doesn't Raven have a precognitive sense? So if something told her it's a bad idea...

Shivers... Season four and all...

GAH! *sticks tongue out* Too suspenseful, and I have to go!

So this is where the picture came from...

Even in all the pain and torture, Terra's "since when is Raven a chameleon?" made me giggle... Again, I have to ask a question I can't figure out: Do you know that Raven turned white in Spellbound because she was in love or not?

GAH! ANOTHER similar idea! In my spellbound pt. II, I was going to make Rorek and Dove (long story) bring Terra back!

It WAS sort of BB's fault that Terra went maniacal... He DID tell her "you don't have any friends" and rejected her apology in Betrayal...

I'm guessing Brown Raven is the cause of Fear Itself...? And purple - thank Love Sick (by Nightbolts101) for this guess - is love...

Is it miso soup?

Shivering at Rorek's and Malchior's talk... (Especially the parts about Raven and Rorek being the same - evil...)

Oh, Malchior's explanation of Raven's action's is so true...

Can I borrow your idea for the robes changing colors...? I'll give you credit if you want.