Wow... didn't see that coming.

There is now a Megas XLR category.

Interesting, and yet... this "Roxy" character seems too perfect for her pants. Beautiful...artistic...doesn't want other's pity..."punk"-esque atmosphere surrounding her being... And, she causes self harm...not that self-mutilation is perfect, but it's way overdone. Everyone likes to write about a character with a cutting problem these days to please the conformist masses. Sorry if I'm insulting you. That's not what I mean to be doing, if I am. I just thought that I should let you know. I'm not really into all the hype over cutting, mainly because it is way over used and the character in your story seems to be the perfect type. No flaws aside from cutting, which will soon be stopped because of Coop or Jamie (most likely the latter) yelling at her about her self harm and she'll break down in his arms crying, yadda yadda yadda. Or, something to that effect.

I don't mean to insult your story, like I said before. It is well written and there is really nothing to complain about in the spelling-grammar area (which is more than I can say about most authors here on FanFiction...). Just...be careful about the clichéd plot lines and perfect-ish characters. It gets old after a while.

Best of luck,

*R.R.*

(Feel free to email me if you want to yell/discuss/complain about what I've said.)

i love element yay element! Bandit in my ff has an element t shirt on! great story continue soon!

Kinda sad. Y did u rite this? I rite sad stuff to blow off steam or to express myself. Like it a lot. Update soon, please.

OMR! I love you so much Kelly! I am gonna make u a shirt that says Fuzzy Cactus on it in art! Write more!

Hey, it's me kloud. I've only seen one episode of Megas XLR, but your story sounds really good so far. I really liked the beginning, but then, i'm pretty much obssesed with wings... Otherwise, write more!

kloud

Swet! Hope you keep goin with this!

Giant Robot Dreams!

Super-Veggie-San