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LightDarkandChaos
2009-10-13 . chapter 15
... Amazing. Just amazing.
Cherrysinger
2009-09-06 . chapter 2
Huh?! "The porn could not have come at a better time."

...What is THAT? It's a typo...isn't it...right?
ice vixen x (not signed in)
2009-08-13 . chapter 15
I loved it. Wonderful job.
Bottan
2009-07-04 . chapter 15
Okay, loved the whole thing and I'm going to pursue the sequels, side stories, etc. - but you really have to correct the title of this chapter: it's not "Epilouge" but "Epilogue".

That said - thank you for sharing! Loved it! :)
Bottan
2009-07-04 . chapter 7
What'S up with Hagrid's speech?

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bro'thr
bro'thr's

What kind of vocals/consonants would he leave out at those points?

Otherwise a nice chapter. :) Still love this story.
Bottan
2009-07-04 . chapter 5
I love these short glimpses into a life Edward Elric would have lead at Hogwarts. Just one thing:

"I don't believe we've ever had a non-student at this school that had hair long enough to tie back."

Well, Severus, Dumbledore, Hagrid... I believe their hair -was- long enough, eventhough they wouldn't tie it back.

Wanted to say that. :P

And that I love you for writing these. :)
zutarakid50
2009-06-27 . chapter 15
Hey!! Nice story!

My friend turned me to this story so I'm off to read the sequel!!

BTW- Snape was my fav. in this. That and Finnegan's. I usually review every chapter but...explanation too long XD
Muria
2009-05-24 . chapter 15
The chapters may be "ridiculously short," as you call them, but they're very expressive and fit the atmosphere of this story. I really enjoyed reading it. :)

...Now to find Endless Moment...
Turtle Kid
2009-04-18 . chapter 15
Except for the last chapter, this was all exceedingly funny and enjoyable. The last chapter was just enjoyable.
sampson17
2009-03-15 . chapter 15
Well, I enjoyed this immensely and it makes me feel better to know that maybe Ed did find a way home. I'll have to read the sequel!
Kame-tan
2009-03-14 . chapter 15
this story has an interesting setup, having everyone give their point og view about Ed...a little more interaction with the Harry Potter characters would have been appreciated, but its good nonetheless.
xxColorxMexYellowxx
2009-01-26 . chapter 15
oh. I really liked this. good job.
hootpoop12
2009-01-23 . chapter 15
i really lik this story its very interesting and u put the peple into their character so well 2 ^^
irezel
2009-01-01 . chapter 15
:) i real liked this story, great job. :D
InkDreams
2009-01-01 . chapter 15
I thoroughly enjoyed the story the whole way through. It was interesting reading it from the perspectives of different characters...(of course, that doesn't mean I'm not looking forward to reading a 'real' story in the sequel...) was amused by Ed's fanclub, and how they think his shortness just adds to his cuteness. LOL.
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