Love this story and NO DON'T LET HIM GO BACK TO HER! Go all yandere Jack! Don'tet him go back! Nein nein nein!

wow! i like this story a lot! you are great!

Awesome story! :-)

Love the ending... read on a whim, and found Jack's protectiveness and worry kinda funny. And now there's gonna be another one... I was expecting it to be a girl... but what can you do?

Didn't see that coming. ;)

Poor Jack! Though really, he must have known it was too good to be true. #pout#

Oooh, interesting developments!

I like how you bring in the looming threat of Will dying with the C-sections (but please DON'T actually kill him!). Poor Jack and his unrequited love. I feel for him. I liked the bit when he was upset to leave the doctor alone with Will. ;)

I don't take Will as one to cry, or say petty things like; "I don't want to speak with you anymore. I hate you!"

But I've never been pregnant before, and I suppose in his 'state' he's allowed a slip of character.

I really like how the plot is developing. Especially Jack's threat to tell Elizabeth of Tortuga, and Will's concerns about Jack's sanity, and the pirate's intentions towards him.

You're freaking me out a little. I've always HATED male-preg stories, but I stumbled onto yours here, and... I'm kinda liking it. Which is wierd... even for me.

You must be a good writer to take a story-idea I hate and write it well enough for me to get past the first two chapters and want more. Congrats.

Loved it!

Loved this!

I love how Will changed, and Jack was just Jack. I really love the name Gabriel, too.

What can I say? I ADORE this story, from beginning to end, the emotion and everything just made me melt 3 I will definitely read this over and over, don't ever stop writing!

Very cute.

Loved it!