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| raeandcyforever 2006-02-06 ch 7,  | abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! You should let cy save rae again. This is like me and my boyfriend (except the parts about the teleporting and being a titan and...well you get it)Please update soon! |
| Stephanie Fong 2005-07-08 ch 7, anon. | abuseThis is an awesome story and i have a few suggestions. one - raven decides to commit suicide by walking in front of a car, the t car, etc two - raven glides of bridge, embracing the depths of the waters, having flashbacks and cyborg saves her etc. three - raven and cyborg do a suicide pact, if one dies so does the other thus making raven feel selfish about killing two people and starts fresh. |
| Raven of Evil 321... 2005-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour gross. Cy's old, Ravens only about 15. I didnt read it but the summery said it all |
| Bittersweet98 2005-02-17 ch 7, | abuseOK, sorry for the late review, but I wanted to review anyway. That was awesome! As I am reading I am watching your chapters gradually get better and better. And I love the angst factor, with enough romance to keep me reading (C/R 4 life!). It was really deep, I actually feel Raven's pain...which is a good thing, for me anyway. I can't wait to see what happens to her next. |
| RavensAngst 2004-12-23 ch 6, | abuseAhh, I see now. He had an alterior motive for this "meet the grandparents thing". And the kissing, finally the kissing. Yay. |
| PhantomElphaba 2004-12-22 ch 5, | abuseUm. Okay. Uh. As you can see, I don't really know what to say. Maybe I'll think of something by the next reveiw. |
| PhantomElphaba 2004-12-22 ch 4, | abuseAaw! That was was so sweet! Wait...shouldn't BB and Tera be a little supicious? Just wonderin'. |
| PhantomElphaba 2004-12-22 ch 3, | abuseOkay, first, let me come clean here: I HATE CY/RAE FICS! I don't know why, they just seem...weird to me that's all. Anyway, this was a pretty good chapter. 'Bye! ::goes to read more:: |
| Kish's Kittie 2004-12-22 ch 6, | abuseits,...its so sweet*sniffle*i may be a punker but...i luv romances and this is so, cute, this is definately goin on my fav list...im crying...raven...cy...?*sniffle* |
| BlackShield 2004-12-22 ch 5, | abuseGAH! ::smacks forehead repeatedly on hard metal surface:: WHY DIDN'T I READ THIS BEFORE?! GRR! I'm mad at myself! An old premise, turned from its evil, traditional BBRaeness and morphed into awesome CYRAENESS! W00t! ::hugs:: Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou! Ahem. I really like what you've done with this piece... I await more... Tty on TTH... lol... -BS |
| Xx Tsuki 0o 2004-12-19 ch 4, | abusePLEASE! Write more, you are leaving you readers on the egde of their seats! |
| RavensAngst 2004-12-19 ch 5, | abuseWhy would he take her to his Grandparents? I guess it's as good as meeting the parents, especially since his are both dead. (e*e*p*!) Oh well, thanks for mentioning me! |
| TTlover12 2004-12-19 ch 4, anon. | abuseI really like it but the first person thing is hard to follow. Please update in the third person. Thanks |
| RavensAngst 2004-12-17 ch 4, | abuseDRIFTING TO SLEEP?!?! No kissing?!?! ARGG! That's very sweet, but he just saved her from killing herself, I mean I'd want a kiss, but maybe that comes later? (hahaha. They're not gonna have any more healing equipmet left if she keeps melting it) |
| RavensAngst 2004-12-13 ch 3, | abuseWell okay then... Cyborg's really going for the gusto isn't he? I think Raven really needs to be less whiney, but that's probably just me. Or maybe it's just that she's so strong most of the time she just couldn't do it anymore? Yeah, that makes sense. I think. Hmm what will happen? |