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| MissTwilight 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. You're a very talented writer. |
| SunsetOfForever16 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseWonderful. Absolutely fantastic. You've captured their characters beautifully. |
| IlovetowriteSMP 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseLove your writing style. |
| airbolt 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseIf ever a film left you wanting to know what happened next , then this is the one. I liked this tale because it doesn't Go for the obvious "happy " ending. They are still immensely attracted but ( as with so much in life ) find that there are invisible Barriers between them. Very enjoyable and well written |
| Kitty Kat 2006-06-27 ch 1, | abuseabsolutely heartwrenching.. i loved every syllable. |
| Cunning Linguist 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseYou captured the character's and the spark between them throughout the movie beautifully. |
| MidnightBlue88 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very sad, but ultimately satisfying one-shot. I loved the part about Willie writing songs that "make older men sigh in that heavy, weighted down way and women tear up at his piano bar", and my heart broke a little when I read about Marty sleeping with older men and one boy her age with Willie's eyes. Very realistic and beautiful, a great piece of fan fiction. Thank you for writing it. |
| mon cherie 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseFutileness? FUTILITY! |
| the fourth wheel 2005-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is such a beautiful story. This is exactly the kind of fanfic I was hoping to find right after I watched the movie. I love it, it's fantastic. -Kristina |
| Celtic-Wildflower 2004-12-25 ch 1, | abuseI want more out of this story. It's really good so far, but I want more. Keep up the good work. |
| Jennifer12 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseHey there! I really enjoyed your fic. I love that movie and I always thought Willie/Marty were so cute even though she was young. I hope you do another fic on them soon. |