 Grendle1853 8/27/07 . chapter 1PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
 Hepburn 5/4/07 . chapter 1So...this is good Adrian, so when are you going to finish it? It would be stellar if you did, even seven years later.
Looking forward to the conclusion if you decide to end it. |
 alittlesummerwine 1/5/07 . chapter 1Another great start! Love it if you'd finish... |
 Ballmaster 9/18/06 . chapter 1Hmm. Why did you separate the story? It made it difficult to find in the extremely large number of stories that you have written. Excellent chapter. So, is there is a part five? Because I dont think i found it. Kindly update? Please? |
 Grym 1/6/06 . chapter 1Ah, another little gem...but leaving us hanging with a promise of more chapters! (I'm horrible about that myself, so I can't whine too loudly, but suffice it to say that I hope you come back to this one someday. Soo.) |
 dogbertcarroll 9/7/05 . chapter 1Excellent work. We need more! |
 Fiona 1/28/04 . chapter 1 More, please! |
 Daniela 8/22/03 . chapter 1 Thie Story and the rest of it is great...I would like to read more of it? Please write more...where are the other 3 Chapters.?... ;o)
You write really good. |
 Janet 7/27/03 . chapter 1 Oh, what can I say about Artemis? I don't actually follow the comics - all I know about Batman is from the animated series and the movies, and I know next to nothing about Wonder Woman, but...LOL! Even though I have no idea who Artemis is, her dialogue was absolutely priceless. :-) |
 T.T. Robinson 2/28/03 . chapter 1 When is this going to be finished. |
 Kurosu 10/29/02 . chapter 1heeey! i love the story! hehee, it's funnie: Artemis & paintball! wonderful writing! lookin' forward to more! - |
 TheHuntressDiana 8/20/02 . chapter 1Great stuff as always Adrian. Let the creative juices flow!
Would you consider placing "The Date" up here at FF.net? I'd love to read part 3 of that if you've written it. |
 Batwonderlove 8/20/02 . chapter 1PLEASE WRITE MORE TO THIS! I've been waiting for a long time... |
 Cilia 8/13/02 . chapter 1 Well finally found this story again, I remember reading chapter one, wayyyyy back and it's still one my favorite DC stories and that's saying a lot cause usally I avoid them like the season premire of BtVS. Good work here, keep it up |
 John W 8/6/02 . chapter 1 More? |