 MormonMafia 2006-11-22 . chapter 1oh my god, that was hilarious!! |
 jd burns 2005-06-20 . chapter 1Too Short!!...then again I guess it is a drabble, right? |
 shopaholic90 2005-01-14 . chapter 1Not sure about whether or not Serena would actually... erm... do that..
But I loved Jack and Arthur's responses. HAH. Very much a L&O moment...
I'd maybe consider whether or not you're properly fitting yourself into Serena's shoes but.. it was pretty entertaining for a short prose!! Nice :) |
 Leesa 2005-01-01 . chapter 1 i loved it!! it had me in hysterics just imagining it really. good work ;) |
 Akari Van Halen 2004-12-28 . chapter 1Good work. Sure sounds like something you'd write...that's a good thing. It means you're insane, like me... |
 VillageVoice 2004-12-08 . chapter 1LMAO! This is great. VERY funny. I think I would have a heart attack if she actually did that. But I wouldn't care because it would be funny. |
 BlueAngel8341 2004-12-05 . chapter 1 Hee JJ this was such a hoot. Can you picture Serena just shaking her groove thing with Jack and Arthur looking on? Fun! |