Beautiful one shot!

I absolutely love this fic! I'm working on a fic right now, and one of my chapters had a very similar conversation to this. Great minds, I guess! Good job!

THAT...WAS...SO...SWEET!

so touching.. i love the stars..

aw that's really sweet, you really do know where to stop your chaps's, this little thingie was so nice and it ended perfectly well

keep up the good work!

Ooh, that was really sweet. I totally loved it. Nite now...

Aww... That was so sweet... Absolutely FANTAWONDERFULTASTSIC! By, the way, you had like 1 spelling error - it's not "Gordric" its "Godric"... Just thought you should know...

*sniff...* i get so sentimental. that was really sweet. i like harry/lily bonding stories.

That's really a good piece. I would keep it a one-shot if I were you, not because it's bad or anything, but because this single chapter says so much more than a whole series of chapters could ever say. Keep it up!

good story, gave me the warm fuzzies

aw. this is such a cute story. i really like it, even though it's a one shot. it's really sweet. good job!

Great start! Please hurry and write more!

:D

Emma

Oh wow! This is beautiful!

I absolutely love this one.

This was definately worth reading.

Keep up the wonderful work!

Love,

Pinky

you almost do one-shots better than novel stories. its very well done, good job.