i'm sorry to say that i can't read this, i'm too ashamed of myself, i've completely frogotten about Outlaw Star untill it was in your profile.

I like it!continue!

hey is moonbeam still alive? if you are up date

MORE MORE MORE MORE, DO U KNOW HOW LONG IVE BEEN WATING?

I loved the story! Can you make another chapter(or two!)?

MORE! I REVIEWED STARS DAWNING! MORE PUH-LEEEZE?

Write More! Its good

Put the next chapter up soon please!

Where'd you go? Everyone's over here waiting! Pretty good and keep writing!

That was pretty good, but it was to short! Make more make more MAKE MORE!

Well...that was certainly unexpected. Still, I like this fic!

Oops, please over look that last review. I just notice that this is a sequel. So sorry about that. Anyway, what I have read so far is pretty good, and next time I'll look before I click.

hate it! For one, I don't have a clue who Liara is. Number two, how can you ask whether or not we hate it or love it and then threat a person not to flame it? Thirdly, when and where does this take place? I know that it is after the end of Outlaw Star, but how much time after that. Other then these problems, I guess it is alright.

WRITE MORE! LS

omg that was so good you have to write more asap I want to know what happens so badly