sweet

WONDERFULL! Polished error free!

That was short and sweet!

Aww, lovely! You have a great insight into Amidala's character! :-)

aw shux u guyz ur too nice! but dont worry theed 2morrow im gunna write an Ami/Obi piece... and im gunna do one from Obi's childhood where he... never mind ill just write it ;)

Another Great story, Candy! I love your perspectives on her, as with all the other characters. It seems that a lot of writers have taken a break from Ami/Obi and focused on Ami/Ani. I'm even starting to consider switching for a while. ) Anyway, great fic! Very well written, and I love that last paragraph. It ended completely. It was very satisfying.

I liked this. ONce again, great job! Keep on writing!

Aside from the minor quibble that you got their ages a little wrong (they're five years apart- not three), it's perfect. Seldom is their a decent fic of the two of them that portrays her feelings on their relationship, and I'm always grateful to see one. :) So what if it's sappy- that's just the way I like 'em! :) Sappy, and Ami/Ani... *sigh* ;)