Very good! Believable that it very well could have happened between stories, both in subject and a close echo of Terry's style. Keep it up!

Ow! Well written, I wish the inner core had won out, surely a little fun isn't out of the question?

Falls over in shock. Nice!

Wow! You like Frollo, Maleficent, Snape AND Vetinari!?
You are one insanely awesome person. I tip my hat to you.

It felt great to read your story. That little fact that neither Rosie Palms, nor Queen Molly had signed against Vetinari, along with William de Worde's miscievous thought, was just begging for a story like this!!

Thank you! I'm off to your biography to see if you've written other stories about Vetinari.

very good. me likey. should have been continued. vet a little ooc tho. NYA

aah!! that was so cute...yet sad. cograts at taking a hard pairing like that and making it believable! hope to see more of ure work soon!

Hm... Very good, except the bit with the kiss. Why would anyone want to kiss someone who has been compared to a carnivorous flamingo? Ah, right. Power. Sorry, self opinion overwhelmed me there.

What a lovely little story! Well written, and very sweet. :)

I don't know why there aren't any reviews for this, i personally really liked and enjoyed it. The characters were well written, and you got Vetinari's detached interest spot-on. this is really very good. :-)