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| Lovelessheart18 2008-01-19 ch 54, | abusecool |
| Cathy 2007-10-29 ch 52, anon. | abuseI'm sorry to say that, but I have to say I don't like this story. It's ridiculous what you made out of Riddick! |
| sleepie-kid 2007-06-05 ch 51, | abusewonderful story! loved the way you wrote everything, but gotta say i think you should have left if at this chapter. but that's mainly cuz i'm a sucker for happy endings, and i think jack should have ended up with dominic in the end. wel, yeah. loved this :) |
| NotAfraidToLive 2007-05-13 ch 54, | abusei just read your story and i wanted to tell you i LOVED IT! it was really really good. |
| ClaudZion 2006-11-11 ch 54, | abuseOMG! I just found this and I'm so happy you are writinga again, I loved this story and lived to read it. Thank you for making the sequel. I can't wait to see what's coming... poor baby... I hope he remembers and can speak soon. Keep it coming sweetie. |
| Perrault 2006-10-03 ch 54, | abuseI bow down before you in homage, this stoy is excellent, well done and I can't wait for the next one. |
| vintena 2006-08-30 ch 54, | abuseI was so shocked and happy when I stumbled across the epilogues here! So nice to see you're continuing the story!! As usual your writing style is excellent, your characters are very believable, and I am SO happy Jack and Riddick are together! SO sad to see Dom didn't survive... or did he? Somehow I think Kade is in some way linked to him. Can you tell I'm trying to be vague? Anyway, keep up the excellent work, and again, THANK YOU for continuing this! |
| cricket71 2006-08-28 ch 54, | abuseJust found your story today and read it all. I was screaming at Riddick for being such a wimp in the beginning. You really developed that "drugged" persona to the point where I wanted to slap him before I realized he was being drugged. Great plot and excellent writing!! Loved it. |
| JacklynK 2006-08-25 ch 54, | abuseHoly christ, this is good. I've somehow managed to never see this story before, took me a few days to catch up, but oh my god! Rock on, man, I'm looking forward to the sequel! -J |
| kili087 2006-08-21 ch 54, | abuseI am still not happy about killing off dante but oh well I still like the story I still love the story and hope you update soon yep yep yep. So keep up the good work and I'l see you when the sequal comes out I suppose |
| Death By Teacup 2006-08-18 ch 53, | abuseI love this story!! Good job! |
| Foracious23 2006-08-17 ch 53, anon. | abuseThis story is getting very interesting. Is the Con-X really dead or is it a cover up of what's to come? Great chap, can't wait for the rest. |
| AliasSpyCrazy 2006-08-14 ch 53, | abuseOh! No way! You got to be kidding me! That was freaking sweet! Yay, they're married...yay they have a kid...and he seems like such a sweety...yay they're together...yay i love you...yay this story kicks ass...please update soon. i love it! You're the bomb and i cant wait to read more...Jack and Riddick kick ass... |
| b0mberR 2006-08-14 ch 53, | abuseohmigod ohmigod ohmigod. i just saw this story today and i thought that it sounded really good - the title and the little thing that you put under the title. yeah so i started reading it and after the first three chapters i was hooked - i could not get off the computer! i had to finish the story! you are such an amazing writer. ohmigod and i cannot wait for the sequel of the story. i think your character dom is a pretty amazing one (more like A-FUCKING-MAZING) and could you please please please let me borrow the idea of him. not the complete actual character but alot of the characteristics? anyway i really cannot wait for your update with the All the Kings Horses sequel...please do it soon... |
| kili087 2006-08-14 ch 53, | abuse*starts to wail hysterically* how could you do that...I like dom! how could you give him a girl then take his throne?!! *stops* thanks for updating so soon please put dom back I liked him alot! keep it up its really good |