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Reviews For: All the King's Horses - Reviews: Page 1 of 21

Lovelessheart18
2008-01-19
ch 54,
abusecool
Cathy
2007-10-29
ch 52, anon.
abuseI'm sorry to say that, but I have to say I don't like this story. It's ridiculous what you made out of Riddick!
sleepie-kid
2007-06-05
ch 51,
abusewonderful story! loved the way you wrote everything, but gotta say i think you should have left if at this chapter. but that's mainly cuz i'm a sucker for happy endings, and i think jack should have ended up with dominic in the end. wel, yeah.

loved this :)
NotAfraidToLive
2007-05-13
ch 54,
abusei just read your story and i wanted to tell you i LOVED IT! it was really really good.
ClaudZion
2006-11-11
ch 54,
abuseOMG! I just found this and I'm so happy you are writinga again, I loved this story and lived to read it. Thank you for making the sequel. I can't wait to see what's coming...
poor baby... I hope he remembers and can speak soon.
Keep it coming sweetie.
Perrault
2006-10-03
ch 54,
abuseI bow down before you in homage, this stoy is excellent, well done and I can't wait for the next one.
vintena
2006-08-30
ch 54,
abuseI was so shocked and happy when I stumbled across the epilogues here! So nice to see you're continuing the story!! As usual your writing style is excellent, your characters are very believable, and I am SO happy Jack and Riddick are together! SO sad to see Dom didn't survive... or did he? Somehow I think Kade is in some way linked to him. Can you tell I'm trying to be vague?
Anyway, keep up the excellent work, and again, THANK YOU for continuing this!
cricket71
2006-08-28
ch 54,
abuseJust found your story today and read it all. I was screaming at Riddick for being such a wimp in the beginning. You really developed that "drugged" persona to the point where I wanted to slap him before I realized he was being drugged. Great plot and excellent writing!! Loved it.
JacklynK
2006-08-25
ch 54,
abuseHoly christ, this is good. I've somehow managed to never see this story before, took me a few days to catch up, but oh my god! Rock on, man, I'm looking forward to the sequel!

-J
kili087
2006-08-21
ch 54,
abuseI am still not happy about killing off dante but oh well I still like the story I still love the story and hope you update soon yep yep yep. So keep up the good work and I'l see you when the sequal comes out I suppose
Death By Teacup
2006-08-18
ch 53,
abuseI love this story!! Good job!
Foracious23
2006-08-17
ch 53, anon.
abuseThis story is getting very interesting. Is the Con-X really dead or is it a cover up of what's to come? Great chap, can't wait for the rest.
AliasSpyCrazy
2006-08-14
ch 53,
abuseOh! No way! You got to be kidding me! That was freaking sweet! Yay, they're married...yay they have a kid...and he seems like such a sweety...yay they're together...yay i love you...yay this story kicks ass...please update soon. i love it! You're the bomb and i cant wait to read more...Jack and Riddick kick ass...
b0mberR
2006-08-14
ch 53,
abuseohmigod ohmigod ohmigod. i just saw this story today and i thought that it sounded really good - the title and the little thing that you put under the title. yeah so i started reading it and after the first three chapters i was hooked - i could not get off the computer! i had to finish the story! you are such an amazing writer. ohmigod and i cannot wait for the sequel of the story.
i think your character dom is a pretty amazing one (more like A-FUCKING-MAZING) and could you please please please let me borrow the idea of him. not the complete actual character but alot of the characteristics?
anyway i really cannot wait for your update with the All the Kings Horses sequel...please do it soon...
kili087
2006-08-14
ch 53,
abuse*starts to wail hysterically* how could you do that...I like dom! how could you give him a girl then take his throne?!! *stops* thanks for updating so soon please put dom back I liked him alot! keep it up its really good
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