Lovely- extremely unique! keep it up!

um ok interesting...

Clever. I think I liked it. Correction: I definitely liked it, but in a different way from my usual fangirly yay-way. This provoked more of a moment-of-staring "Wow that was cool" reaction.

wow... that was different! Very original... and I really liked it!

well, the walls can kinda talk

i mean, the paintings can talk, i mean, the paintings are on the wall

but then, that would be like saying the floor can talk, after all, we're on the floor

wow! i liked it!! hehehe...rampaging beast...-giggles- you never really know what lily was like as a girl, so why does everyone assume she was a brat? although I agree that she probably was...

wait, i think i forgot about that one part in the book, but i'm not functioning well today so just ignore my ramblings...

Cute! ^_~

HAHa i like this story its really funny. good job :)