I like it, I like it alot. Please continue.

Very good - it seems to me that the story has some events yet to be revealed though. Tis the season for sharing great stories - I know we would all love to see it continued!

Awesome. Simply awesome. _

This is such a great BEGINNING to an original story! It is so hard to have new ideas and this is a great one. I hope you reconsider letting this be the end. Keep writing - I think you did a great job of keeping Jareth and Sarah in character. Thank you so much for sharing!

Rather good. I wish that some things could have been extended. However, it's a nice story.