:D Me likey, I like it when people write a character's feelings during a certain chapter. :D Kuro-pu!

I like this! You cover how Kurogane has to deal with his curse, judging when it's a good time for him to kill or not, and then being willing to make a sacrifice for his friends. Cute, but meaningful too. Great job!

Whe! I do like your fics, Ali-san, even though I'm not a big shounen-ai fan. You deal with Kuro-pi's thoughts quite well. He's... difficult to pin down at times. So congrats on another well-written fic!

ohohoh! Continue! Excellent piece! well written, suspenseful, and I love the way youexpress Kurogane. Very well. Continue!

Oh, I do like this story...I think you capture Kurogane's voice even better from your previous fic, 'Thoughts'. You depicted his relationship to Tomoyo-hime puurfectly, and yes, he does seem to be too insightful to be truely '*growl, growl* I'm gonna KEEL!' all the time...
You have shown admirable constraint here, for being also kuroxfai fan, I don't think I could've resist in putting more action for those two. Which is one of the top reasons i like your fic,you kept it realistic,and you kept true to the characters, instead turning either of them to a huge blubbering mess... like others I've read (I'm not going to point fingers...I'm not).
I apolologize for the rant,and I do hope you'll contribute more to the tsubasa fandom in near future. I'm going to stalk you with author alert now.
ps. Wouldnt it be fun if someone writes a 'fai meets Tomoyo-hime' or 'Kuro meets Ashura-ou'fic? *nudge,nudge, wink,wink* ha ha.