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rita louise evans 11/17/06 . chapter 1
Good story
Jeff's favourite skittle 12/9/04 . chapter 1
Awa...oh, I was totally rooting for Jeff and Lita to hook up as I read that, but then the ending line...poor Matt! He didn't do anything to deserve it!

Good story, I really liked it. Hm...as for constructive critisism, watch out for spelling, but apart from that, its really got some potential! Keep up the good work, keep up the Team Extreme writing!

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