 NinjaFurtle 2007-07-20 . chapter 1Awsomness! So, like..Rikku and Auron died, and their memories are part of Yuffie and Vincents, and since Riku and Auron are togther, that kinda makes..Yuffie and Voncent together..? |
 Airemir 2006-10-15 . chapter 1Okay dude, I have to be flat out honest with you right now. I have never played FF7 either. Ever. But I really love Rikku and Aurikku pairings. But your story somehow got me hooked on Yuffentine pairings too, even if I never played FF7. I love how you somehow found the similarities between Yuffie and Vincent and Auron and Rikku, and how you can make them fit so well.
But you have a few typos. Sorry, I know I'm going to sound picky, but these sort of things really get on my nerves.
At the second paragraph, you wrote "like a month courting a flame", when I'm sure you're looking for moth, not month. And then on the fourth last paragraph you typed "Yuffie jabbered andmade a dashfor the door." Just make a bit of space for these, please. And chagrinned, last third paragraph, only has one n.
Other than those small nuisances, you've got an inspirational, (at least for me) story, and I just completely love it. Can I make a short fanfic based on this? I swear, my head is just buzzing with ideas. I mean, with an ending sentence like that, it's just begging for a sequel. If you're not going to write one, I would just love to do one. Please? |