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Reviews for: Goodbye, Hello
NinjaFurtle
2007-07-20 . chapter 1
Awsomness! So, like..Rikku and Auron died, and their memories are part of Yuffie and Vincents, and since Riku and Auron are togther, that kinda makes..Yuffie and Voncent together..?
Airemir
2006-10-15 . chapter 1
Okay dude, I have to be flat out honest with you right now. I have never played FF7 either. Ever. But I really love Rikku and Aurikku pairings. But your story somehow got me hooked on Yuffentine pairings too, even if I never played FF7. I love how you somehow found the similarities between Yuffie and Vincent and Auron and Rikku, and how you can make them fit so well.

But you have a few typos. Sorry, I know I'm going to sound picky, but these sort of things really get on my nerves.

At the second paragraph, you wrote "like a month courting a flame", when I'm sure you're looking for moth, not month. And then on the fourth last paragraph you typed "Yuffie jabbered andmade a dashfor the door." Just make a bit of space for these, please. And chagrinned, last third paragraph, only has one n.

Other than those small nuisances, you've got an inspirational, (at least for me) story, and I just completely love it. Can I make a short fanfic based on this? I swear, my head is just buzzing with ideas. I mean, with an ending sentence like that, it's just begging for a sequel. If you're not going to write one, I would just love to do one. Please?
losttoxichope
2006-06-04 . chapter 1
I liked this. It was unusual but I def did enjoy it. Nice job.
marsupialgroove
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
That was wonderful. Your stories are always different, which provides hours of entertainment. I thoroughly enjoyed this, and your characterization was fabulous. I look forward to reading more of your writing!
Imperial Panda
2005-01-04 . chapter 1
I didn't think they were to OOC, not that i care anyway. i thought it was real cool. i hope you intend to write more.
Katrazaie Leonheart
2004-12-14 . chapter 1
Very GooD!
I would like to see some more!
like the way you paired up the people Rikku/Auron
Vincent/Yuffie! and how you kept yuffie and vincent in character so well!
TheDonutMistress
2004-12-12 . chapter 1
When I read that you hadn't played up to either Vincent or Yuffie I was baffled. You've kept them very much in character and I love that. :)
Qem
2004-12-06 . chapter 1
I liked this fanfic ^.^;

Auron and Rikku is a... strange combination.

I've played up to Yuffie but not vicent for ff7.

I'll look out for other bits of your work

Keep writting!
Andrea Christoph
2004-12-06 . chapter 1
Wonderful job. :) Perfectly in character, with a slightly bittersweet feeling to it. And it's a liable occurence- Auron and Rikku in Yuffie and Vincent-...well, as liable as Final Fantasy can get. Heh.

Lovely. ^^
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