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| Les Scribbles 2004-12-09 ch 1, | abuseYour first? Really? I don't believe it. This is WAY to good to be a first... IT'S AWESOME! Although, if asked, I couldn't, it simply... is. I really look forwards to your future fics. |
| Hakudoshi-chan 2004-12-07 ch 1, | abuseThis seems kinda cool |
| silver_tears 2004-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseo yes, u definitely gave kraddykinz a lot more personality ^_~ mwahaha he def would mean grevious harm to split ends if he ever...finds them -_-;; which he won't...NEWAYZ! Ahem, wonderful lil fic u wrote up, it was very well-written ^_^ Enjoyed it very much including the metaphors with the jigsaw puzzle and the rain. Hope to see more from u! |
| weirdfreak 2004-12-07 ch 1, | abusei just browse on the 'just in' thing and i'm here... hmm... comments (you said you want to). Basically, it's really good. and descriptive... but i just wish you add up some dialogues (to be better, i guess... yeah right, as if i was a genius) Actually i dunno this anime but this story's cool... |