Interesting. Very interesting.

I enjoyed your auteur version of this pairing.

Very lyrical, almost like reading poetry.

A different take and very impressive.

Oh...wow. Not very eloquent of me, sorry. But that was my first reaction.
This story... it's almost like a poem, with a steady and stange rythm underneath the words. Or maybe it's all in my head. =)
At the same time it is a puzzle. Some parts are familiar and others seem to have no meaning. And then I read the note in the end and reread the story and had my little "aha!" moment. For that and for the wonderful story I thank you.
Besides M&Kag are a great couple.

I liked it. It had a sort of abstract feeling to it. And now you made me want to read about Endymion and Selene and Merlin and the Lady of the Lake. It was good.

Forgive my ignorance, but I know nothing of Endymion & Selene, and a lot less about Merlin & the Lady of the Lake; One thing I know is this was true artwork. The Adam & Eve part was all it was in a few words. It was amazing. Now, I think I'll be off educating myself in the art of literature, and is that Mythology?

Oh, this was nice, very nice. I love how it's written like poetry. My favorites are the first, third, and fourth (ii), although the whole piece was entirely brilliant. I love how you take the "less words is more" policy to the bank and back, but still create stunning imagery. And of course, there's underlying theme and symbolism with every single word. And the writing style as a whole is so beautiful and mature. I could go on forever, but keep up the good work, you're very talented. This is definately going on my favorites list and getting recommended at my journal.

♥

eh...interesting...kind of confusing though