Wonderful, well rounded, well written story! Thank you!

Excellent! Wonderful story! I love Josiah's explanation to Ezra. It was well done and timely!

What a fantastic beginning to and premise for a story! Wow!

Another excellent story

excellent story!

I've finally finished reading this and I just have to say...hoooawahyamana! (in other words gob smacked rambling) that was so good! most probably one of the best I've ever read, I'm not exagerating either. I loved the descriptions you used for the moon and sky, almost as if they were alive, the moon really is beautiful, why once I saw a corn moon and I was like 'woah!' *gets her mind back to the subject* it was really well narrated and I never once had to stop to try and figure out what was happening which proves how good it was. You portrayed the characters well and I loved how you linked Ezra's past with things we see in the show, eg- his gold tooth. That made it seem so reall and added a brilliant effect. welldone. I actually found myself liking Jake when he first came in, it was good how you didn't make him completely evil as the most convincing bad guys still have a bit of humanity left in them. "Ezzie baby!" LOL!

Wowie! That was another great story! I saw Ezra fighting those two guys during "The Trial" and I couldn't help but wonder why he didn't look all the worse for wear while Chris was fighting that one guy and had his nose bloodied...(I hope my memory serves anyway...0*EG* :P *sigh* what a vision the man must be in the ring... LOL! But my favorite part of the story? "EZZIE BABY!" ROTFL! That was too good!

great story! i love your portrayal of erza

I can't say how much I loved this. It was really wonderful, but all your writing has been, so no big surprise there. :) For some reason I just loved Ezzie Baby, what a fun nickname. :) Jake was great, I was sorry he was really evil there. Poor Ezra, even the "good" things he has to look back on weren't that good. :( And I loved the whole boxing thing, too. Sigh, what I wouldn't do to see Ezra in silk shorts. Er, that doesn't sound good...

Great story Tipper !

Thanks,for sharing it

Robin

Woohoo! Awesome descriptions! Not too much, not too little. And have I mentioned that I *really* like what you did with the moon? _ Great fic. All I can really say.

I like your personification of the moon (but I believe someone else already pointed that out _) and your characterizations, especially the last bit with Ezra and Josiah. That was so sweet! /scampers off to read the end

Whoa... that has GOT to be the BEST description of a sunset I have EVER read! *g* /goes off to read the next part

A delightful and believable jaunt into Ezra's past. I'm liking it. Keep writing!

I liked this. I liked your personification of the moon. Jake was good and I loved the whole take on Ezra's character.