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| Jan 2008-07-11 ch 17, anon. | abuseWell,... Wow! Now I have to read it again. In a few days time I think. |
| Moonlit Eyes 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI haven't read a Ranma 1/2 fic in over ten years. I don't know why this one caught my eye, ESPECIALLY since I'm hardcore RanmaxAkane fan (one of the very few cannon couples I like). I'm really glad I did read this though! It's so beautiful...makes me want more. I love how you remembered Kasumi, as well. People tend to forget her. |
| Janzo the Ashbringer 2008-07-05 ch 17, | abuseAny errors or critiques that I could give have long since been lost to the overall adoration I have for this fic. It is a beautiful romance story between two people who just seem so "right" for one another. Even though time travel annoys the crud out of me, I have no problem when it comes to this fic, and I say kudos to you on creating such a masterful piece. It had just enough romance, and an excellent amount of emotional tension right where it needs to be. I'll be looking out for your fics from now on, so please keep writing. |
| RudyHenkel 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseAmazing story. Truly amazing. After pondering it for a while to comprehend the twists, it seems that new time lines will endlessly be spawning off that point of divergence, but with a different Ranma each time? Is this how you see it? That is, call the original, young Ranma, "Ranma A". Call the original, older Ranma, "Ranma B". Now, Ranma A & B are switched, and then switched back. B continues on with her future blissfully, but A has changed as a result of the experience, and we now designate that Ranma as C (this would be the Ranma from chapter 17). Now, C gets older, and some years later, is switched with Ranma A, and then switched back again. This time, C continues on blissfully, but A, having encountered a slightly different future in this timeline, becomes Ranma D. Thus, the cycle continues, with each successive Ranma dealing with the slightly and successively different futures created by the previous Ranma, alphabetically speaking. So, no individual Ranma is caught in an endless loop, and yet there is a loop of sorts, generating an inexhaustible source of slightly different Ranmas... Does that make any sense? |
| Violet Shadows 2008-05-02 ch 17, | abuseReally good, but I don't think Ranma would have needed a note at the end, so long as you realize it would have been ranma herself who got sent into the past 'again' only to be pulled back into the future five days later allowing her sixteen year old form to be sent back that would allow this whole situation to develop. That's the thing about time travel...its confusing, but relativly understandable so long as you remember that the inciting incident was Ryouga when he was 16, after that a sort of self sustaining loop develops. Of course if you really want to feel your head hurt, think about the seperate time stream Ranma makes when she's sent back in time and screws around with Kuno. |
| FlareX3 2008-04-04 ch 17, | abuseThis story had a surprisingly deep and unique plot. You definately have a way of capturing the intensity and drama of the moment. You had me contemplating the complexities of time loops and the emotional shock of finding that a loved one does not only hates you, but doesn't remember you as well. Truly, your hard work at developing this story is evident. Good job seems inadequate, but I'll go with it. Good job. |
| DarkBlueHated 2008-04-04 ch 5, | abuseMade me laugh hard, but at least my beliefs came true. Ranma would be a lot harder to contain if he could still be male, so yeah locking him in female makes up for both Sachiko and the whole married thing. |
| DarkBlueHated 2008-04-04 ch 4, | abuseDon't let flamers get to you! They're just closed minded, constructive criticism is far better for improving the quality of a story but flames or anything derogatory is just plain blegh. Anyways, nice chappy, we get to see Ranma's changes after hitting his head. |
| DarkBlueHated 2008-04-04 ch 3, | abuseHmm, if Ranma could turn back into a guy then he'd never go for this. He would be stubborn and just refute everything forced upon him, which is what it seems like. Well, it's a good read so time to continue. |
| DarkBlueHated 2008-04-04 ch 2, | abuseX_X Agh! Nu that witch is back! lol well wouldn't be my first Ranma thinks he's a girl and marries a guy fic though the beginning could be a bit more original. Still it's an interesting read and 6 years is a lot of history to build up. |
| DarkBlueHated 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI'd break down if I was put into that situation. x_x |
| Veglma 2008-03-04 ch 17, | abuse*cheers in glee* That was a lovely read. :D (And wee!! I could read the thought on the loop thing with out screaming bloody murder! XD) Eheh, Ranma? You are going to have to buy another gift for that day, methinks. *snorts in amusement* Well, glad to see that the quest didn't make Kuno more insane. XD (And I have the urge to see if I can find the full Kuno's quest. XD) |
| Veglma 2008-03-04 ch 10, | abuse...Okay, that might be mean on what they did to Kuno, but it was so AWESOME! :D And I can't wait to see the ending of the quest. XD (Yes. Ya might NOT wanna exploit that. XD) |
| Veglma 2008-03-04 ch 7, | abuseBWHAAHHA!! Good going, Sachiko! :D *giggles at the wedding video* That was so very awesome. :D *points and laughs at the ending of the chapter* |
| mistressKC - wanteddeadoral... 2008-02-28 ch 17, | abuseThis is such a beautiful story, just wanted to let you know. Thatnks for letting us read it. |