...I'm sorry.
I... can see that, over a long enough time period, it is at least in principle possible for Ranma to prefer being female, and with Ryoga, to being male, and with a wife.
And given the sheer amount of gender isolation that Genma raised him in, it's brought to the realm of theoretical possibility.
But as well written as this story is, I cannot enjoy the premise enough to accept the possibility.
Good writing, but I don't like it.

OH MY GOD! I DID NOT EXPECT THAT!

Oh! Im so glad you didnt stop the story!! I really like it :) STUPID BAD-REVIWIER-GUY/GIRL!! :(

omg XD poor ranma... or ... ryoga??! haha! love this!!

Aww! She gave him a kiss on
The forhead that's so sweeat
And it is a step in the right
Romantic derctshion:)

From what i red it looks like
Ranma and ranma will eventaly turn into eath other
Over time.

I just remeberd at the bigging of the story kuno was ther with flowers and he
Wanted a date evan duu ranma is marryed to ryoga was She cheting on ryoga with kuno

Well never read this before mostly because I read the beginning and wasn't that impressed then cheated and jumped to the ending and was...confused. Read through the whole thing today and was very happy I did. This is a great story.

The time traveling and slow acceptance of the change was very well done however it was not particularly in character in my opinion as is almost always the case for Ranma becomes more feminine fics, but still well done. That in my opinion is however the weak point of this story. You attempted to create a situation where your readers were supposed to consider the 'this is entirely plausible and Ranma could conceivably become more girly in this fashion route' and in my opinion this often just doesn't work. I felt that in this story that was weak. Not that you didn't succeed it's just that I think you needed more of the younger Ranma experiencing the future that he/she would be missing out on if he didn't end up with Ryouga as his spouse. In my opinion you just didn't sell it enough. That part of the fic should have been longer.

On the other hand I thought the future Ranma going back in time was SUPERBLY done. Great stuff there, love how she tricked Kunou into sanity. That was the best part of the fic to me not the younger Ranma in the future which I felt desperately needed more development. My big problem with this Ranma in the past thing though was her not noticing the scar and such from the C-section...Um...wouldn't that alert her to the fact that she had in fact given birth and it wasn't a dream? Seems like a rather large plot-hole considering that she was looking for proof and you used that with the past Ranma in the future as the final clue about what happened...

Other then those problems this was a great fic. Wonderful writing, dialogue, grammar, etc. Could have used a little bit more descriptions as in the end I have no idea what older Ranma did with her hair in the end (heh)...Thanks for sharing this fic it was very enjoyable.

This was one of the most moving fanfiction I've read.
The development of Ranma's character and the progress in the relationship with the other Ranma 1/2 characters were well done. And in my view you made good work here, especially as you considered the change in every character and gave a detailed look of the most important one.
So in conclusion I say that this story is a must read for everyone, who likes "Ranma is/becomes a girl" fanfiction.

Hi

I'm just getting back into the whole fanfiction thing after a seriously long hiatus, although perhaps not as extensively as I once did.

However, it is reading stories like these, that make me remember why I love writing. You wrote this story with such emotion and made it believable. I read this entire story in one sitting. I started at like 4:30pm I think and it is now 1am.

I am not one to usually read these types of stories, not because I'm some macho homophobe or anything like that, far from it. In fact, reason I started reading this is I'm toying with an idea for my own Ran-chan/Ryoga fiction and I wanted to do some research before hand, and out of 10,0 odd stories, after setting the search parametres to a certain criteria, yours was the ONLY fiction that came back, and I take to have some special meaning.

You my friend are a Class A Master Writer/Author, and this story will be going in my favorites immediately, and you will be added to my authors alert.

Thank you, for writing this story.

I just hope I can write my stories, as well as you have writen this one.

Thank you again...

This is the 2nd time I've read this story.
It's really an excellent piece of work, after all.
Granted, I have a weak spot for Ranma/Akane and Ranma/Ryoga pairings. (I'm a fan of keeping with canon and all, but come on naysayers! Think outside the box, would you? That's what fanfiction is for, after all.) I can't really find any fault with it. At all. Except for the time travel deal. (But that's just because it gave me a headache trying to figure it out on my own.) Superb, superb story. I look forward to future works from you.

I love this fic! I mean seriously it rocks!

Sorry if I'm a little late to review... I like the RanmaXRouga pairing, even if the shows all old now.

hah! this is the second time i read this story. i still love it though. :D

Thank you.

I thought I had an idea of the causality(sp?) in your plot but now I'm confused. 23-year-old Ranma's hair grew when he didn't have the Dragon whisker in it, but 16-year-old Ranma didn't have the scar on her torso. 16-year-old Ranma's body moved forward in time with her, but 23-year-old Ranma seems to have her 16-year-old body again. Or does she still have her own body, and the Dragon whisker simply affects her because it's magic and plays by different rules?