I've first read this in your site,and I thought it was good(I was young and innocent).But now that I read it again(I'm not young and innocent)I realise it's awsome!Good that you added Mimou hints.your best Jyoumi so far,also you should take a look at it again,there are some typos.

awwww i love it, inspirational!

I love the BNL.. they rule... I loved this..

Yay! It's Mimou! Mimou! Mimou! Mimou! Cute, wonderfully well written, completly in charcter, and did I mention Mimou! ::does the happy I found a Mimou fic dance::

This was tooooo cuuuuuute! Micro hints of Jyoumi. Uh-huuuuuh. That's a given. .- Wonderful as always! It sure is a good thing that we have you around to write some quality Jyoumimi's when I'm having writer's block or a lazy spell. ;.; I'm so glad you're heeere! Write more soon!

Aww, how cute! Jyomi forever!

Good job Shanni. This was a very great story. It was also so cool. Well gotta go!

THIS IS SO CUTE! hmm...i wonder what i'd get if i had a million dollars...wonder who i'd share the ideas with... *starts to make a list of things she'd get and ways to get a certain someone to talk it over with her* heh heh.. -;; this is really cute though, good job!

Cute, funny, and sticking to the characters *real* personalities. Not like what *other* writers write. It was pretty nice. Did you write any more like these?

If I had a million dollars?Let's see...A new subspace Lab!That was cool anyway.

i thought that rocked can u make a sequal to it so they fin out that they both like each other and then joe would have a girlfriend . i feel bad for joe because know on elike him more than a friend :(

so can u make sequal?

email me your answer and send it to me when u r done

thanx

That was so Kawaii! I loved it _ very good and very in charector.

Pretty good story, very romantic, and emotional...Even if it was short...

That was really cute! I loved it.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was sooooooooooo sweet! Jyoumi/Taiora/Takari forever! 10/10