really enjoyed this story! thanks for sharing!

OMGosh! i thougth she was dead! great story! such an eye catcher!

Awe, don't that just beat all. So sweet.

Oh no! What's he doing that he had to leave her?

uh-oh. I love the description of him sleeping.

Damn.

"I'm politely refusing to completely edit sections of my story b/c some people don't like them." Integrity, nice to see.

"kissed her cheek close to her eye" Awe.

Good grief, that may have been one of the best love scenes I've read. Is it hot in here?

Love the turn this part took. And Paris's wisdom, a nice change. Not to mention her bravery. Really, you're writing is so fabulous that I didn't feel like I was just reading what I had already seen in the movie. Well done!

I absolutely LOVED that chapter. His memories are so well written. And it's obvious when he comes back to reality without having to say something like 'and he blinked away the memory' and whatnot. You're writing flows so well, it's very enjoyable.

Excellent first chapter. You gave backstory without being all repetetive of the movie and without being annoying about it. But also with that came a good set up for the future. This is the best Troy fic I've read so far.

nice

this is really good only prob is spelling but i can't talk if u want read my story protection it is good

Even though you wrote this a few years ago, I still had to review and say that I loved it! Too bad we can't rewrite history, huh?

Very nice

I like this story! I want to see if they get back together! Must read on!