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tuatara
1/17/12 . chapter 94
The idea of putting *so* much work into a project like this yet not ever wrapping it up in some fashion seems…well, pretty crazy, frankly. If it can never be finished properly, perhaps it would be a kindness to the readers to post a summary of how it was supposed to end? Just a thought.

PS: The Akane/Smith fight was pretty hot.
korat5
9/12/11 . chapter 34
this story just jumped the shark
Byakugan789
9/22/10 . chapter 78
aww...It's nice to get back to this and at the same time...I can't help but wanting to go back in time and strangle you for a) bring back the dbz stuff and b) taking away the hellion costume. I liked that little shapeshifting shirt.
Byakugan789
9/22/10 . chapter 75
Mmmm...BWAHAHAhahahahaha! It's even in charactor! hehehehe... I'm sort of surprised you didn't send carrot and company over this way earlier or anything after that string up of the old plot but it's been interesting so far. Sort of a big plot hole though, if ranma can't come because the musk would need a ruler while herb is away temperarily or perminantly, why would Herb have been allowed to leave to find the kettle in the first place?

Glad you got out of the big dbz arc to, btw.
shadowfan999
9/5/10 . chapter 94
this was one of the best stories i have ever read please write more chapters and continue.

ps:can you give the good ranma a super saiyan 4 form later in the chapters please,that would be so cool.
Riniko22
8/10/10 . chapter 94
I have enjoyed the story up to this point and do hope that you will be continuing it sometime in the future.
Riniko22
8/9/10 . chapter 71
I had so hoped that they would have done something as a wedding gift to help that poor boy's memory. Well at least Ryouga how has someone to ease his pain and Akane has found someone that will never remember her fits of anger or not to eat her cooking. Wait are those two really good things?
tw2000
7/14/10 . chapter 67
lawl
tatewaki2000
7/14/10 . chapter 65
:D

YAY! A GOOD CIFFHANGER.
tw2000
7/13/10 . chapter 56
getting better...

...bust still...bleh
tatewaki2000
7/13/10 . chapter 49
This has become lame.

D: NUUUUUUUUUU!

Sheesh. I should just skip these chapters. Not funny. And just too weird. Ummm Hitting puberty? Control them hormones!
tatewaki2000
7/13/10 . chapter 46
...wow...

How angsty of you. o_o
tatewaki2000
7/13/10 . chapter 37
HOW. FRIGHTENING!

THE TRUTH ABOUT GEORGE LUCAS. =_='''
tatewaki2000
7/13/10 . chapter 35
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

BRILLIANT!

I'd expected it. BUT EXCELLENT EXECUTION!
tatewaki2000
7/13/10 . chapter 27
Just. Wow.

Saw this when I was young. Didn't get it.

Now that I'm reading it...I'm shocked at how good this fic really is.

:D

Great writing!
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