This is simply an awsome story. I hope you will continue to update it since it is just so good.

I read Insertion once again for Spring Break. :D almost like a tradition for me now! _, I do hope you continue soon though. An update for either this fic or Gaijin would be most appreciated!

belive it or not i did read all of this and i would like to see the outcome

It took me a full week, but i've finally managed to read through the entire story.
Carrot, what i like about you is that you can take things that normally would offend me seriously (like a story that goes into hell, if temporarily) and make it interesting and enjoyable. I love your writing style.
I also have to ask if you are planning on posting another chapter soon. You seem to have multiple projects going on right now, and i'm just wondering what you're going to focus on.
Hope to read more soon.

I heard that fanfiction.net no longer will allow self-insertion fics. You & some other prolific self-insert authors might want to watch out for that.

I love this story. So finish it. PLEASE! I must know what happens!

The Agent Smith bit was a nice touch. I was sure
someone was going to shoot him in the foor while
he was dodging shots by moving the upper half of
his body tho'.
Won't the parents be in danger going to the Tendo
dojo?

"You didn't call your mother for seven hundred years, that's how. Honestly man, what's wrong with you?"
LOL. Still by far the best line in this chapter.

Of course we thought of FMJ. You had Usagi beaten with
soap in a sock by everyone and made her an expert sniper.
That's FMJ right there. *grin*
You get Minako and Makoto mixed up at times.
"Well, I'd ask you why you're all here, but I'm not done laughing
at you just yet," said Trunks cheerfully
LOL. Great scene.
The 'death of the soul' bit with Ami was too melodramatic. It was more
like the death of her conscious or if you must be melodramatic, and
truthfully this is a good scene for it, the death of innocence.
This was a really impressive chapter.

Love the DI!
Nice Full Metal Jacket atmosphere.

Ah. So the Ranma bit was just a slip on her part. Cool.
Your version of the duel with the Jurian poofer was better then the original.
Great ending!

"Oh! You're home Akane!" exclaimed Nabiki.
Isn't she still watching the fight from Jurai?
I thought the mask only worked at night.
How is he using it durring the day?

"Something is wrong, Ranma should be
wiping the floor with that thing," said
Nabiki calmly.
Small error. They still think he's Trunks.

Banter class! I thought he was going to see if the fusion
dance would work with him as well. *grin*
Yes after reading the cliffhanger I do hate you.
*chuckle*

Mihoshi the Super Saiyan. Proof once
again that Kami-sama has a wicked sense
of humor.
LOved the jedi scenes.
"Hm. I sense much beer in this
one," said Yoda wisely.
"Nobody expects the Jedi
Inquisition!" snapped the young jedi.
LOL. Nice work.