Reviews for Dust of the Leyarn

Reviews For: Dust of the Leyarn

PrInCeSsFBi 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abusethat has to be the best written Fanfic i have ever read i saw teh show on tv at one point and decided to check it out and i have got to tell you i am impressed trust me it takes a lot to impress me
kayura sanada 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseI loved this! You've probably hardly gotten reviews, and you've probably almost forgotten about this story... but this was really good. ^__^ Sorry it took me so long to come in here and see it.
E. Villain 2007-08-30 ch 1,	abuseIt's pretty good. I just have one criticism, if you don't mind. Even if you're just a recreational writer, I think you should keep it in mind that you don't need to say "the boy" or "the Norse". It's kind of distracting when reading it. Don't be afraid to just say "he" or "she". It flows better and even if there are two people of the same gender in a conversation, just use their names periodically.
tohru80 2007-08-27 ch 1,	abusethis story is amazing. so detailed and emotional. i almost cried when dar was stabbed. as drawn out and detailed as it is, it could have been an actual episode. i loved it.
irishgirl9 2007-03-23 ch 1,	abuseGreat story!
Chikidee 2006-09-29 ch 1,	abuseI absolutly Loved it:D You did a great job with all the characters and the settings and everything. It was great!!
CatLover4113 2005-11-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseI loved this story to the very end. You can see all the characters clearly, hear wehat is happening, feel the anguish and the grief. Great story. I will be pleased and delighted to read any other stories you make about Beastmaster.
Miss Kinneas 2005-09-26 ch 1,	abuseNice work! Its good to see that for once someone that has not only writen a great story but also worte Voden very well cause it seems like every fic I see him in he's a total weakling. You wrote it very well but yeah I must agree smaller chapters would have been better and hey if I were you I would make it the first ep in your series of BeastMaster stories, I bet they would all be awesome. Keep up the great work, Miss Kinneas
cutepony 2005-07-02 ch 1,	abuseThis is a very good story. There were a few things that I think could have been done better to achieve a greater reasult. For instance you kept using the word 'practically', I've checked and if you used microsoft word then the thesaurus comes up with a whole list of equally good options. Also, because this story is so long it might have been a better idea to divide it into chapters just to break it up a little. Apart from a few small spelling and gramatical errors there wasn't much else. Keep up the good work! :)
angel74 2005-06-16 ch 1,	abuseThis was awesome. Well done!
Stormchilde 2005-03-06 ch 1,	abuseI had to read this like three times - It's just so great that I kept skimming 'cause I'm so impatient. AWESOME!
shirik 2005-03-04 ch 1,	abuseWHAT A GREAT STORY! IREALLY ENJOYED IT THANKS.
Beni-kun 2005-02-26 ch 1,	abuseHey, this story was good! Keep up the good work! See ya later, peace!
morningstar2 2004-12-16 ch 1,	abuseI just discovered that has beastmaster fanfic! When did this happen? Anyway, your story was the first I read. It was great- descriptive, but never slow. Also, your origonal characters were nicely done. Write more!
Melpomene blue 2004-12-10 ch 1,	abuseThat was good. A strong plot and good characterizations. Very interesting -- it read quite like an episode.

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