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| Neitzarr 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseYou need to edit it. Or well not spell check, but there are some words joined together, just put it in Word and it'll pick up the errors. I cant believe I haven't reviewed this chapter, I could have sworn I did, Ive read the rest of the fic as well. Anyway. Sasuke seems so...cute! I mean just his whole personality. He just seems so cute. ^^ And I don't even like him that much. Um yeah. Well I'll just say now that I love the story, incase I've already reviewed the other chapter. It's a work of art. Yeah. :) |
| keiko-uchiha 2008-03-14 ch 38, | abuseum, this story was so cool and cute i was gonna ask if u were making a sequel but i can see you are ready are. I will add you to my author alert list and favorite story list xP |
| ApplelovesApple 2008-02-01 ch 38, | abusecool |
| pamellka 2008-02-01 ch 33, | abuseLoved it!Btw what's Aishiteru? |
| XxHyper ChildxX 2008-01-25 ch 2, | abusehehehehehehe.i forgot sakura:lilly evans(later potter) oc for neji:nymphadora tonks hinata:um...i guss the girl sirus would fall in love with ino(PIG!lol):alice...um...did she have a last name? |
| XxHyper ChildxX 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseu do know this is lilly and james potters school story right?pranks,annoying conceited jerks? sasuke:james potter neji:remus lupin naruto:sirus black shikamaru:frank longbottom(waht didnt think i would make him be peter did u?god no!) |
| Fung 2007-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abusedude... this story line is soo stolen from Harry Potter. haha. |
| mintxrain 2007-09-27 ch 38, | abuseDude, I LOVE this Fsn fic! But i wish you continued it. ;-; |
| hikaolover2 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuse*SCREAMS*...I LOVE THSI STORY SO MUCH I COULDNT STOP FROM THE MOMENT I STARTED...*DREAMY FACE*...I WANT TO READ THE SEQUEL SO BAD ITS KILLING ME HOPEFULLY I WONT DIE BYE THEN... P.S...I LOVE SASUKE, NEJI AND NARUTO THEY RULE CHA >. |
| reader ninja 2007-08-07 ch 38, | abuseThis is really good! Thankyou for the wonderful fanfic, it was confusing at first but now it's addicting! =^_^= |
| 93addict 2007-08-01 ch 38, anon. | abuseHey!! Enjoyed the fic!! Can't wait 4 the sequel 2 come! and Damn! Everything is heating up! |
| Neitzarr 2007-07-06 ch 38, | abuseThis is one of my ALL time faves...ANd Im not sure why... But I love how its written...and somthing and and and I LOVE IT! |
| Elyre 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abusethis somewhat reminds me of Harry Potter... hn.. the prefects... boarding school... and... LEAF EXPRESS! thought that was funny... Witzboldes huh? cute name for the foursome |
| Co0kIeS-n-CrEAm 2007-06-17 ch 38, | abuseAww no kissy at the end? Shniff! Anywhoo great fanfic. My stomach went up and down during some Saskura & Sasuke moments x33 ♥ xSasuSakuLovex aka Vivi-Chan (: |
| me 2007-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abusewhether you know it or not,you've created a marysue*.its unoriginal and boring.reli,its disgusting.plz stop writing,for all our sanity's sake. *Mary Sue are females inserted in a fandom so that the author (generaly female) can relate to said character and better imagine herself being a kickass ninja and conquering the heart of every male character. She is usually so beautiful it hurts the eye, more powerful than any god that exists, shy and gentle and cute with everyone, makes the evil, twisted and psychopath characters become nice little lambs that only want to be forgiven, etc. Usually, people don’t really like reading about someone else’s sick dream or fantasy, which are Mary Sues. Keep it in your head folks, and everybody will be happier! yup,sry A-chan5,i copied it off you,but i had 2 spread the word! |