Really good but could have been longer

Punctuation is your friend. And that's "you're a good brother," not "your."

this is so stupid! i'm sorry but this isnt even fanfiction. This is just a transcript of exactly what happened except you typed that grace's lie in the show was in fact the truth in this version! Come on!

Good job. This is one of my fav shows. Keep up the good work.

how is this even fanfiction? nothing is changed from the original scene? go read some fic and figure out what it is

A nice change to the scene. I think there should be more Jack and Grace scenes... but it keeps things more tense between them. Anyway, good job!

Aw! That was so sweet! I love that episode and I'm glad you took the time to write about it. I do disagree with Grace not smoking pot (it's too much of a story line), but you're the artist. Good job. I liked it.

Aly K