Now this is quite a funny one shot of Ginji and Natsumi trying to avoid Paul's ire by washing up and yet get closer despite the fact a flood was caused and wound up annoying Paul just as much.

that was great loved it. you got them down packed.

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"orange head" Ginji's blond.

Very sweet :)

His crisp laughter filled the room. “A love life is only one of the many things that can make a person cheerful.” He tipped his chin with his soapsuds-filled finger. “But I can say with all honesty that I love a lot of people. I guess that makes me happy.”

She raised her fist proudly. “Yes! The great shining power of love…of all-powerful commanding passion…this is every person’s reason to exist!” Her eyes turned to meet his gaze, only to realize a few seconds later that she got…well…too carried away. As quickly, she placed her clenched fist down, blushing hotly. “Er…”

- Those are my favorite excerpts from the story - they truly and effectively reflect the canon personalities of Natsumi and Ginji. Way to go! XD

WOW...WOAH...WOW...

This is the first GB fic I've read, and I seriously don't think i can muster the right words to lavish upon your fic.

No OOCness at all, and there was a praise-worthy mix of seriousness and comedy.

syaoran no hime-san has GOT to be one of the best writers around!

ALL THUMBS UP!

P.S. I love this bit too:

“What the…Honky Tonk will now include a water theme park in its amenities?”

its cute i love ginji

cute!

This was sweet. I really enjoyed it, and the characters are well sketched. Good job!

Another excellent fic from an excellent writer. Excellent.

...okay, that's it. I'm adding you to my favorites.

it was great you should make another story to go with it!

a natsumi/ginji fic...wow, now i'm happy! ;g uhm sorry for the late review...but all i can say are praises! i find the story really cute! (you are one of the best writers in ):3. how do you manage to write a LOT of GREAT stories?... anyways, i've been kinda hooked with your eriol/tomoyo fics (ccs) coz' i support the pairing too. hope you can make new fics for us to read (ne, really looking forward for fics you make .

kawaii... its not too mushy! yey! lolz... the way ginji was... it was quite amazing.. interpreting a person... i admire that..

Ah, the tangible sweetness that is Ginji/Natsumi. Wonderful work balancing cute Ginji and serious Ginji. Not to mention Paul's comment about water parks and pools. Very nice! v

Nicely done.

awsome! wish it wasnt a one-shot! *crys*