lol funy

This is best story ever I love it

Several misspelled words here, man! Fix it! Awesome story, btw!

update please!

LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!

XDXDXDXDXD loved it! update soon, pweaze!

I loved this chapter and you never cese (sp) To amaze me! Keep up the good work and see you on the next chapter!

um...o...kay...this chapter is going under 'things NOT to let my little siblings read'...NEway, it was still really good! update soon!!

Wow...Okay, um...yeah. I only have one thing to say.
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VALKOV!
He he, Sparkle Sparkle!!
Awesome!! I was totally in stiches throughout the entire chapter, this was so funny! (Although Yugi's whipped cream fetish is in fact extremely scary!)
^-^ Everyone's on a sugar high this chapter, it's crazy/brilliant!! It's bonkers/sensible! It's--uh-oh...*Once again Lia gets arrested for ripping off those Honda ads*
Before I go I really liked the style of writing you used in the chapter intro bit, it really reminded me of how I write a lot of stuff (it was mainly in my GCSE English essays, whoops! But I got like A*'s for it so HAHA!)
And WHY is it that whenever Yugi said something (eg "YO PEOPLE OF THE BATHROOM!") I could hear dear Pugi's voice in my head...? Hmm... Funny!
Well, best be off, have fun with the next chapter (and the next, and the next...!) I'm gonna check my reviews now...hm...more threats, how lovely!
Byesies! SPARKLE SPARKLE!

~Lia~

Wow Mai, what a great chapter! As usual you made me laugh plenty of times with the ol' yami and hikari antics and of course, I can't wait to read the next chapter (but don't feel you have to rush for me).

I think you've portrayed Ryou and Bakura's relationship in an interesting way, they seem to bicker quite a lot! Hehe, but the fact that Ryou made Bakura get changed again was very good. But...I am now VERY scared of Yugi and his fetish for whipped cream, especially when the Pharaoh is involved. But, not as scared as I imagine Yami is... And of course, who could forget our favourite tombkeeper, Marik! His little presenting thing kept me amused as well his madness when Malik didn't seem too bothered about him saying how he felt.

Well, anyway, I've talked far too much so now I'll go. Keep up the great work, your writing's really developing!

S. Chensu (aka Tomby) x.

O.OGod Yugi has become creepy. But I have a message for you: You planted a seed of humor and grew a laugh on my face x10.(copyright, don't you dare steal it!)
Keep writing, I want to keep annoying my brothers by bursting into fits of laughter.^_^

WHAT IS YUGI DOING TO YAMI!?!
UPDATE ASAP!!

I loved the chapter! Looks like the other boys are going to "do" it too! Update soon!

XD lol! I love it!

Omg, im laughing so much. This is a very rare story but the one thing i must ask is, how did u make malik, bakura, yami etc personalitys? Ive only started to watch the show and in here the seem a bit different. Why?

Anyway i like it. lol