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| yaoifangirlHolly 2008-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseSo cuute! But a little longer next time?? I love the gay fluff!! |
| McPhee 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI thought that this was totally beautiful. You have a wonderful way of describing stillness that made me want to be there on that beach. It would be really nice to see a longer piece (I don't know if you have done longer pieces. I am new here :) ) I agree with other reviews, that for me the marriage part wasn't the important part for me. It was the way that the two were sat there together, 'peacefully'. I didnt even think it necessary to mention where Amy was...the two of them together was a strong enough image that no justification was needed for me. Really wonderful. |
| TheGummiBear 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abusePerfect! That's so cute. |
| Nickeltjuh 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet! |
| qsmadness007 2005-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery cute story... |
| Jack Doug 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuseReally beautiful! I don't think the wedding is important, what it was was this moment in the beach... Really great! |
| MadScientistGirl 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWhat do you mean, the end? I want more! Where's the wedding? Anyway - I really loved this story. Very emotional. I loved how you write the quiet parts, when no dialog is necessary. Wow. |
| ReRe04 2004-12-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was too cute, and woo hoo for Massachussettes! |
| Sam Cdn 2004-12-09 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was so sweet! You described their love beautifully without getting too explicit, or too mushy. I love how you had them sitting on the beach together, but not speaking for a long time ... it sounds so nice and peaceful. Really nice piece, I adored it! -Sam |