Good job its a great story. But instead of telling us the japanees, (oh spelled wrong)translation tell the story in english to make it easier!

This is kewl!

And here I wanted Paildramon and Dinobeemon to go at it. :-) Good stroy thou, keep writing

^^" i reviewd on full metal but i forgot to add my E-Mail lol! sorry!

Another good chapter can't wait to see what happens next.

I think this is very good and would love for you to continue! . . . . Please?!?!?!

Oh I like this...chapter was a little on the short side but tis early. Umm another thing is that you may want to put the dub equivalent of some of the digivolution, evolution levels because I believe that the dub calls Daemon's level mega...and I can just see a bunch of people complaining about how you've given Daemon the wrong level...or maybe I just have low confidence in humanity...hehe...

Good so far - great characterisation...something you don't see too often now!

Update soon!

Very interesting, this sounds like it’s going to be a very good story, cant wait for the next chapter!