Excellent story! I love the ending. I hope you will continue to write Cole stories. I love how you write his character. And I would hope that he would have a happy ending with Phoebe somehow.

This was a very good story. I really liked Cole being back; he was such a fun character. This was well written. Would've made an interesting episode. Sorry to see it come to an end. Thanks for sharing it with us. Keep up all your good work.

AH more more more need to see what happens next.

I don't read very many fics about the Avitars, or Kyle; there aren't very many that I've seen. Anyhoo, this one is very good. I like the idea of bringing Cole back. He was one of the best bad guys, even when he was being good. This is really good I can't wait to come back and read more, keep up your good work.

I really love this story! I love how Cole is working with Kyle and the others. I can't believe Cole would kill Kyle though. This story is really well written - the dialogue is great. I can't wait to read more. I really don't want this story to end! I want Phoebe and Cole to have a chance. Please post more soon!

Your story is excellent and I enjoyed Kyle's interaction with Cole.

"First, I would like to thank the wonderful Juanita Dark. This chapter could not have been possible were it not for her brilliant essay analyzing Cole Turner's character. If you have a live journal, you can read the essay at charmedtheory."

I would like to state that I had read Juanita Dark's analysis of Cole Turner's character . . . and to be frank, I found it questionable.

Hehe, that's my favorite quote from Hamlet.

Good chapter. I look forward to the final one :D

(Well not really forward to it... cause then you'd be done... but forward as in I wanna know more... lol)

Heheh... Phoebe just can't help but fall for the demons can she?

Hey...wow finally after a long time a good update..had to wait alot but it was worth it!yeah its getting good and good..plz update soon..thnx!

Loved the chapter. Please update soon.

Excellent story! I love everything about the library and the librarian. That whole scene was extremely well done and very clever. Ferron is an excellent touch. I just hope he remembers to pick up the sushi! And Zeta continues to be a great character and a wonderful foil to Cole. I just hope there will be a happy ending for Cole - I am a sucker for romance!

This is such an awesome story so far. I like how you've made Phoebe not trust COle and I like how he's still trying to get her back and all. It works really well. Kyle and Cole are becoming really good friends. I also liked the librarian. You should have him come into the story again. Can't wait for chapter 6 so update soon!

WOW...I'm in luv with diz story...diz is so gud and different 4rom the season 7.I think this is soo gud that the charmed writers should have read this.Plz and Plz keep writing and plz update son...i want more and more of this story and plz make phoebe and cole with each other I beg ya. And u know that song dry your eyes mate was the right choice.

Is there a possibilty in the next chp that phoebe starts to have some feelings for cole? anywayz i'm so looking forward to the next chp...thnx 4 the gr8 story!

I must say, that library of yours has singlehandedly made me enjoy this story twice as much. From the caretaker demons to the rules of the Gether Library to "Serving Evil since 1306", it was well worth the wait. Ferron, as in the latin word for iron? Zeta was wonderful as usual, though i disagree with the advice he gave Cole. Though i know this story isn't based on romance, I hope that Phoebe and Cole will end up together (especially with Leslie out of the picture).

great story. keep it up.