This was definitely an unusual pairing, but the story was very well written and you made it work. An excellent piece of femslash.

NICE

Yay. That's exciting. I like it.

Wow. For a one-shot, this is amazing work. I thought it was going to be boring, one chapter and all. Really though it's all extremely structured. Grammatical errors are pretty much non-existant too :D. We.

Your flat humor kept me grinning too. That line just before dedication...haha...love-channelless story XD...also there was something in the middle...and exploding dicks XD...

Shouldn't 'Pansy chuckled. "Oh, how Gryffindor of you, Weasley. So much yapping about turn about and fair play and all that rubbish. Shut up and enjoy the free lunch, will you?"' be 'Pansy chuckled. "Oh, how Gryffindor of you, Weasley. So much yapping about turn and about fair play and all that rubbish. Shut up and enjoy the free lunch, will you?"'

Drama was stirred in too. I'm not a fan for drama, but you kept this around a central plot line(yay!) and really did -shape- the characters. Not just plop them in front of you, but really gave them purpose.

The ending was extremely, erm, fluffy. All's fair in Fluff and War though, right?

...*cough*ahem.. just ignore the pun...and keep writing stories like these. It's nice, and feeds the heartache and desperate passionate poetic lover in someone somewhere for sure(that's a good thing, right?..).

hah this is fantastic, and I like your little dedication at the beginning too!

absolutly fantastic.at first i thought pansy would be a total raving bitch to ginny, but in the end she wasnt. you made me happy!

this is my fav one shot romance with a pg rating it bloody great the best in its class i read it on every site i find it btw this is my first review hope to see alot ginny pansy from u im work on my own hope it have as good as this

not bad, not bad at all!

really good. I love it.

it was freakin awesome!! only one prob. you repeated the story twice.

was awesome

I'm not one for same sex stories, but that was really really good! It was really well written!

this is one of my favorite stories! Ginny and Pansy are my favorite girl/girl partnership. is this story finished? if you continue to write on it that would be cool, but i love this ending.

I loved how you developed Pansy here. She was still very Slytherin, but it was easy to get to know her and identify with her. Great job!

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