This was really good, although I echo the opinion of another reviewer who said that this was a wonderful background to a longer story, Letty pregnant with the child Dom wants, Dom stuck with his stupid blonde bimbo. I think you should write it, I'd read it.

Wow this was very well written, However very disappointing because I could totally predict the ending. Although i thought she would shoot him, but I think driving off the cliff was much better.
I was also disappointed because I felt that this was such a great lead to a longer more in-depth story. And also saddened b/c I'm totally unsupportive of suicide and I think it was out of character for a strong woman who cites her catholic religion in her marriage.
But thanks for writing.

In all its angst -- and somewhat craziness -- this was an awesome story. Your heart breaks at least five times. I loved it!

umm no that's not psychotic at all...

lol

loved it!

Wow, that was really...interesting. I like it, but it was...well, like I said, interesting.

WOW! That was great

OMG! That wuz so sad and so...irrational! I luved it! Keep up the good work, this was toally awesome! I love evetyhting you write so far...lol Keep it up!

the story was written good, like always, but i didnt like the events. i like happy storys, but still great story for any on who like this kinda style
l8az,
M'Kenzi

that was good

Wow...I can't really describe what I think about this...I mean suicide is wrong but I think this was written really well. Good job!

Oh my God! That was amazing! I so didn't see that coming! You are an awsome writer!
SHAMe

bravo. This is excellent. A classic. Keep it up, loca. I love the description. I kind of forshadowed that let was gonna die. I thought she would commit suicide. But killing them both?!?! I never in a million years expected that.

OMG! All I have to say is WOW! It is written great and really shows that other side of Letty that is so rarely seen.

Damn, I am speechless. That was really intense. Job well done.

Hey, I haven’t been able to review any story in the longest time, because of my demented computer! Anyways omg! I love this story its is deffinetly going to be under my favorites! I love how describe how Letty feels towards Dom and his cheating ways, and how she had to drive the car over a clift to keep his love from “the otherwoman” everything is just, amazing! I love it! Especially the summary it really caught me! Love it!